A retiring girl in the festival Photo

Photographer’s Note

When I focused on her, she was very much shy and bashful. That action and attitude made her more cute and sweet.

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delkoo (34094) 2009-11-07 2:38

hi takero,
This is a lovely photo. The exposure and focus are perfect. she seems very happy to be photographied.

well seen and well executed.
-Warmest greetings from France.-

didier

mursaloglu (5120) 2009-11-07 4:16

konnichiwa my dear takero
amazing potrait work she is really very pretty and fantastic colors around. The borders of the dress of the girl is mixing with the ornaments of the background like the same scenary together. Bravo Have a good weekend ihsan

RPoole5552 (1643) 2009-11-07 6:20

I like the portrait of the girl. I would have cropped more of the distracting background from the top however. I hope you don't mind. I have done a workshop to show you what I mean.

Rob

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yquem46 (7816) 2009-11-07 7:27

Nice portrait of this cute little girl
have a nice WE takero
patrick

saxo042 (15404) 2009-11-07 9:15

Hi Takero,
This is really a very pretty girl! All colours are very fine and I also like the traditional design of her dress (kimono?). But I think I have advised you to concentrate on the central subject, i.e. the girl here. There are some activity going on in the background that I think is a bit irrelevant. I tried a WS, where I cropped away some of the background to concentrate on this pretty girl. I hope you don´t mind!
Kind regards
Gunnar
Kind regards
Gunnar

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Morac (20166) 2009-11-07 14:09

Hi Takero,
Thank you for this look, thank you for that smile: they are sublime!
Good Sunday
Marc