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Urs
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(2425) 2009-06-29 16:14
Dear Tom
Very nice capture of the two boys with the umbrella in the rain. It seems only they are afraid to be wet, nobody else seems to border. Colors and DOF are fine, but sharpness is a bit soft. You may could consider, to position the boys a bit more off center, your picture would be more attractive. However that is my personal taste. Well done
Best regards
Urs
mafegan
(3949) 2009-06-30 5:10
Hello Tom
A good street scene from Kenya. A lot of colour, a lot of action and a lot of water! Very good composition. Tfs, Marlene
