Photographer’s Note
I don't know if they were sisters, but they looked very much alike. The scene tooked place inside the Blue Mosque, in Istanbul, in the place reserved for women to pray. Maybe I was invasive by taking this picture, but I was really moved by the scene, they seemed to be really the one with the other, sharing a pray, and sharing so many other things...
As for the technical features of the picture, the light was not at all good, no tripode, so not really good definition, but well...
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Urs
(2800) 2009-06-18 20:14
Dear Maria
This very pensive pictures is very nice and intense. I like how you captured them unexpectedly. That is much better then arranged pictures. Very good use of available light. Nice colors and good DOF. Well done
Best regards
Urs
maglex
(1568) 2009-06-18 21:16
A very symbolic photo of these two women showing how the practice and customs of their religion has evolved with regards to women and Islam. Thanks for sharing...Alex
daddo
(11328) 2009-06-18 23:06
Hi Maria. Sisters whether biological or sisters in faith, the two are nicely set against the old stone and gentle light.Subtle and restful scene. Regards. Klaudio.
levente
(475) 2009-06-19 0:15 [Comment]
yquem46
(7862) 2009-06-19 2:10
Hi maria
I like this very intimist moment well shown under an adequate light. too bad for the bag on the left !
Cheers
patrick
Jeppo
(11872) 2009-06-19 2:43
ciao Maria,
welcome back. it's a pretty long time I haven't seen any photos from you.
it's true....they are very similar!
I like their devotion, the silent atmosphere here.
I also agree on your choice to have a diagonal POV to include both the colourful carpet and the white marble
ciao
silvio
MichaelLevy
(589) 2009-06-19 3:37
Hi Maria,
This is a really good capture of a quiet moment of devotion and thought. I think your use of the available light works to underscore the sense of intimacy here.
Congratulations and thanks for sharing.
Best,
Michael
Greg1949
(8507) 2009-06-19 4:14
Maria, wonderful instant in time that you have captured here, the shadows are wonderful and enhance the color and sharpness, great work.
Greg
quillo
(7166) 2009-06-19 9:41
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Hola María ....:
¡cuanto tiempo sin pasar por tu galería!
Y me encuentro con esta interesante imagen,
que para ser una toma improvisada sin trípode
te ha quedado de lujo .... los colores y sobre todo
la luz ... "SOBRESALIENTES", para mi tienen mucho
mérito este tipo de fotos, felicidades.
Un saludo amiga y hasta pronto.
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rodgerg
(23957) 2009-06-19 10:57
Hello Maria,
An superb scene of life in this famous city very well colected. The atttitudes of the two young girls are very well collecetd. Good balalnce in the composition too and excellent managment of light. An excellent photowork.
Have a nice WE,
Roger
akm
(690) 2009-06-22 18:10
Hello Maria,
This is a beautifully composed image with lovely light and colors. I find it sensitive and respectful. Thank you.
Mary
gilou530
(35156) 2009-06-25 4:18
hello maria
an image full with serenity with these women who request in the half-light, a pretty vertical framing and a beautiful management of the light, well done
friendships
gilbert
Ninello52
(3322) 2009-06-25 11:06
Ciao Maria
Bella ed intensa questa immaggine! Brava a cogliere la luce giusta, bella anche la tonalità cromatica, mi piace il rosso del pavimento. Intenso ed espressivo l'atteggiamento delle due donne.
Saluti, Nino.
clio
(22621) 2009-06-25 13:12
Hola María,
Momento muy bello, una gran intimidad. El enfoque es excelente, la luz dulce pero presente.
También me gusta el juego de los grafismos que pasa de la pared a la alfombra con un paso sobre el fular.
Un saludo
Diane
BilboCA
(734) 2009-06-25 21:32
Hola, Maria,
Most of the points have already been made. But I'll reiterate what seems most important to my eye.
I like the "in the moment" character. It is enhanced by the less than perfect sharpness. So, technically, I think the execution is well matched to the subject.
The light coming from behind the girls works superbly. (Like God looking over their shoulders...)
Visually, I find my eyes strongly drawn to the geometric pattern on the wall above the girls. This strong regular pattern just above their heads serves almost like an arrow, drawing our attention to the girls.
And, I agree with Patrick. Too bad about the bag on the left. But that is a minor point.
Congratulations!
- William
Clementi
(43943) 2009-06-26 5:26
Ciao Maria,
Bellissima, un atmosfera incredibile, una luce meravigliosa e che delicati colori.
una vera opera d'arte. ero curioso di vederla in bianco e nero e mi sono permesso di fare una ws. dimmi cosa ne pensi
Giorgio
anesugur
(16826) 2009-06-27 13:21
Hi Maria,
Wonderfull capture.
Very nice composition, excellent light and colors.
Best wishes. Uğur
mondele
(711) 2009-06-28 0:13
Une image bien composée et pleine d'authenticité. Bravo.
Bon dimanche,
Philippe
scalerman
(25731) 2009-06-28 19:37
Maria: this is a effective compo and a successful image. Great vertical divisions help with this fine image. c
erdna
(5348) 2009-07-05 19:49
A beautiful shot! Despite the light coming from the back you were able to give definition to the features of the faces. The dark side of the photo emphasizes the wondrous light you captured.
andre'
ryno
(4610) 2009-07-19 23:57
I like the soft light coming in from the side, also highlighting the beauty of the carpet. You caught the moment well. I would have been tempted to crop some of the dark space on the right, but that's just a personal preference. A beautiful image.
Ryno
MarcT
(21097) 2009-07-23 7:57
Hi Maria,
Great use of the natural light conditions. A stolen picture but it was worth it.
Best wishes
Marc
Glint
(3042) 2009-07-28 23:47
hello Maria,
there is a nice light and warmth about this image. The closeness and companionship of the girls with their heads bent and the light behind them offers a reflective atmosphere.The warm colours and patterns of the carpet contrast with the geometry patterns above them. You did well to get this shot in the circumstancves.
best regards,
Bev
smarcell
(14279) 2009-08-03 23:51
Hello Maria, your gallery is very interesting.
Here I like the scene, but also the light, which is perfect to enhance the two girls, very concentrated in their book.
Regards Stefano
Longroute
(9295) 2009-08-09 10:53
A very intense photo, a masterpiece of composition and subject. You made a fine use of your camera.
Best compliments,
Donato
Photo Information
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Copyright: Maria Bartet (mariandrea)
(973) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2008-11-08
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/4.1, 1/15 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2009-06-18 17:35
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