Photographer’s Note
From Damascus/Dimashq-Şam. This man's -reading Quran- age was older 90. Hope he's still living.
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(744) 2009-05-26 9:16
Hello Ozlem,
This sympathetic shot stood out to me as a thumbnail. However, to be really good your photo needs several things: 1. more context -- your crop is too tight (since there isn't a lot of detail in the figure of the man and the image seems cramped); 2. rotation (to make the lines vertical); 3. sharpening to bring upo the details of the stone walls (since they are not deliberately out of focus); and 4. a frame.
I really hope this helps!
Regards,
Mary
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Photo Information
- Copyright: ozlem aslan (ozlemaslan) (101)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-04-23
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/5.6, 1/60 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2009-05-26 4:50
Viewed: 527
Points: 3
Discussions
- Nice !!! (1)
by Neelu, last updated 08-20 10:30 - To scyntilla: merhaba (1)
by ozlemaslan, last updated 05-27 06:47
