Photographers Note
BULUT MU OLSAM..
Denizin üstünde ala bulut
yüzünde gümüş gemi
içinde sarı balık
dibinde mavi yosun
kıyıda bir adam
durmuş düşünür.
Bulut mu olsam,
gemi mi yoksa?
Balık mı olsam,
yosun mu yoksa?..
Ne o, ne o, ne o.
Deniz olunmalı, oğlum,
bulutuyla, gemisiyle, balığıyla, yosunuyla.
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shall i become cloud
red cloud is over the sea
silver ship on ur face
yellow fish inside of it
blue alga in the end of it
a naked man on the beach
he stays thinking
shall i become cloud or ship
shall i become alga or fish
neither that nor that neither that nor that
it must be sea,son!
with cloud,with ship,with fish,with alga
with cloud,with ship it must be sea son!
NAZIM HİKMET
Critiques | Translate
COSTANTINO
(22126) 2009-04-14 13:06
Hello Friend
Amazing photo of the sea water..
I like the lightness of the scenery and the detail you mention by the title..the red fish
Original version,a lovely shot very suitable to celebrate sea,elegant composition
regards
Costantino
pabau
(486) 2009-04-14 13:18
Bonjour Cevdet
If I were a little red fish, I surely would like to swimm in such a sea.
Pascal
Does the poem of N. Hikmet speak about little red fish ?
HondeR
(692) 2009-04-14 14:00
Merhaba Cevdet Bey,
Dikey kadraj ile yaratilan derinligi, netligi ve siir'in kompoziyona kattigi havayi coook begendim..
selamlar
hasan
KemaLMerT
(11074) 2009-04-14 18:30
Ustanın şiiri ile buluşunca çok hoş bir şalışma olmuş. elinise sağlık.selamlar
BurhanettinMasa
(641) 2009-04-14 20:44
Merhaba,
Gerçekten güzel bir kare olmuş, ellerinize sağlık ...
Burhan
bostankorkulugu
(33328) 2009-04-14 23:38
soyun atla diyor resmen... hava kötü ama kim takar, deniz resmen şahane...
tober
(3872) 2009-04-15 0:04
Merhaba Cevdet Bey, fotoğrafın üst tarafı Kuzey İrlanda, alt tarafı da Maldivler adeta:) Hoş bir çalışma olmuş. Tebrikler.
erhan1958
(3685) 2009-04-15 3:48
MERHABA CEVDET
DERİNLİK VE TURKUAZ RENKELR ÇOK ETKİLEYCİ
EMEĞİNE SAĞLIK
ERHAN
berek
(28750) 2009-04-15 6:20
Merhaba Cevdet,
ya negüzel bir balık öyle ama nakış açısı arka plan suyun rengi dahada muhteşem. eline sağlık. selamlar.
Burak
halikarnas
(2061) 2009-04-15 8:48
Cevdet Usta,
Gene konuşmuş objectifin.Bu negüzel mavi tonları,bu ne güzel netlik! Urla nekadar değişmiş.1963 askerliğimi Bornova'da yaptığımda yazın buraya gelirdik bir-kaç arkadaş.Benim için Urla ilk önce Askerlik hatıraları ve sırt üstü bütüngün sahilde yatma,yemek yeme.Tabii şimdi mümkün değil.
Fotoğrafın sağ alta yakın su halkası,sol altta kırmızı leke nefis.Bütün bunları süsleyen ve manalar katan şiir Mükemmel.Senin eline sağlık,tebrikler.
Ataman
batalay
(20658) 2009-04-16 18:56
Merhaba Cevdet,
Ne kadar berrak bir su, Nazim Hikmet'in siir ile beraber sahane bir TE paketi olmus.
Sevgi ve selamlar,
Bülent
hay_kes
(28554) 2009-04-16 23:43
Merhaba Cevdet,
Son derece etkileyici bir görsellik.Kapalı havaya rağmen turkuaz rengini yakalamış olmanız süper.Eline sağlık.
Selamlar,
hAyAti
Miha2ou7
(4887) 2009-04-17 5:10
Hey Cevdet,
One of the more atmospheric photos in your collection. Beautiful kind of monochromatic colors and a dramatic sky. Nice compo too. Some noise is seen in the background, no doubt due to the extensive PP work. But still very nice.
Best regards.
ciakgiak
(10070) 2009-04-17 11:52
Dear Cevdet,
the surface of the water is so trasparent, all the atmosphere in this image is absolutely special, colors and POV are fantastic, and the red fish...
Well done my dear friend.
A dear hug
Giorgio
Cricri
(42735) 2009-04-17 12:09
Merhaba cevdet
J'aime l'avant plan avec la tranparence de l'eau et le tout petit plus avec le poisson rouge, un tout qui contraste avec l'arrière plan plus sombre
Friendship
cricri
danos
(31562) 2009-04-17 18:29
Hello Cevdet,
nice shot with transparency water in the foreground with the dark sky and background sea water.The little red fish and the poem of Nazim Hikmet create a specific scene.Well done.
Have a nice weekend,Danos
rodgerg
(22953) 2009-04-18 1:09
Hello Cevdet,
An image of immensity with the loneliness of this little red fish in the sea. A very great propsect and nice and various colours of the sea very well collected.
Have a nice WE,
Roger
Jardim
(3189) 2009-04-18 11:22
Olá,
beautiful view very relaxing one, a combination of the earth and the water and the sky. I like it.
JJ
pablominto
(39872) 2009-04-19 3:21
Hello Cevdet,
An excellent colour palette!
The simplicity of the composition is very appealing, and we also get an interesting view below water surface...
An artistic presentation!
Greetings,
Pablo -
marietom
(31766) 2009-04-19 4:35
hello Cevdet,
superbe composition, avec de très belles couleurs !
Bonne journée
Marie
ChrisJ
(69430) 2009-04-19 17:04
Merhaba Cevdet
I like the gradation from blue at the top, to cyan at the bottom. Good sharpness & incredible clarity of the water. Tfs!
gunbud
(27515) 2009-04-19 17:56
Hi Cevdet,
Beautiful layser of fantastic turquoise and silver blue colors.
Very tranquil coast scene with a very nice poem to go along with the fine image.
Regards, Tom
axiotea
(15895) 2009-04-19 21:20
Hello Cevdet
The turquoise and transparent water with the little red fish make for a good starting point and gave an interesting contrast with the darker BG.
Cheers
Marilyn
tetixxx
(1907) 2009-04-20 3:55
merhabalar,
suyun berraklığı ve manzara çok güzel..elinize sağlık
slmlar
said
cagla
(2032) 2009-04-20 6:26
Merhaba Cevdet Bey, renk geçişleri nefis olmuş, turkuaza ise bayıldım. Gökyüzüyle birlikte harika bir atmosfer. Elinize sağlık.. Selamlar.
Çağla.
anesugur
(16514) 2009-04-20 13:31
Merhaba Cevdet,
Hep okyanus fotoğraflarında gördüğümüz harika turkuaz tonunu kötü havaya rağman iyi yakalamışsın.
Selamlar. Uğur
gracious
(20017) 2009-04-20 21:51
Merhaba cevdet,
Selamlar!!
Awesome colouration on the seawater, the clarity towards the bottom just incredible and beautiful!
overall a beautiful image with best colour
many thanks for the sharing
greeting
Tony
TGULUMSER
(12406) 2009-04-22 9:25
Cevdet Bey merhaba,
Ne kadar harika bir goruntu. Denizin rengi, berrakligi super,
Elinize saglik,
Tulay
jemaflor
(38801) 2009-04-22 11:17
Hi C,
So lovely color for the sea in the forground, well framed and good shrapness, well made.
scyntilla
(1040) 2009-04-24 1:44
Cevdet Bey,
Harika bir foto. Ayaklarimi suya sokasim geldi.. Uzaktaki tepelere bakinc ainsanin ici urperiyor. Elinize saglik.
Petek
denisn72
(6867) 2009-04-28 17:39
Hi Cevdet
The little fish has an amazing place to live in. The point of view is awesome. as well as the colours. The different tones of blue and grey please me pretty much. Very interesting and different. Well done!
Best regards
Denis!
foozi
(4551) 2009-05-11 21:56
Hi Cevdet,
excellent clarity and superbs depiction of the sea. I like the hues and colours in the distance sea.
Beautiful presentation.
regards,
Foozi
plimrn
(19552) 2009-05-17 15:59
Merhaba Cevdet,
Amazing effect to see the fish so well in the crystal clear water and still see a distant view of mountains and an approaching storm.
HLJ, Pat
aadilj
(17950) 2009-06-23 4:53
Exquisite and spell binding. I love the colorus and love the little fish. Great perspective and dof
oanna
(1196) 2009-06-30 7:45
hi,cevdet,I`m really amazed by the clearness of the water.composition and the various shades of blue make you think of a sunny vacation at the seaside.
all the best!
Amphitrite
(1565) 2009-09-09 11:25
Merhabalar,
Cok degisik bir bakis acisi.
Renkler, yansimalar ve de kucuk kirmizi balik muthis bir ahenk olusturmus.
Elinize saglik,
PINAR
Gunes
(259) 2009-10-07 12:46
Suyun ve "little red fish"in netligi, renkler ve tabiki Nazim'in siiri. Cok guzel bir kare. Emeginize saglik.
Photo Information
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Copyright: cevdet ozcelik (yedirenk)
(7123) - Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2009-04-03
- Categories: Nature
- Camera: Samsung S800
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2009-04-14 12:53
- Favorites: 1 [view]
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