Photographer’s Note
This photo was taken below the river & it was a risky one. It was very difficult to take it due to the splashing of water.
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drt100
(838) 2009-04-03 20:07
Dear Rizwan
This is a very nice start for an entry into TrekEarth. Perhaps the mist has made the colors less vibrant. But you have a good point of view (POV) and composition (overall content placement). Perhaps there are other photos within this trip to the falls that would also be worth sharing. Please do so. drt100
berek
(29041) 2009-04-03 21:44
Hi Rzwan,
welcome to TE . its hard work because of this strong nature place. but the result is successfully. feel nature atmosphere and wetness :-) .
have a nice weekend.
Burak
trekks
(14334) 2009-04-04 0:31
hi Rizwan
Welcome to TE community. Your post entry of this photo marks a new era of your photography sharing here to improve your work and it is a good start by showing a photo of a waterfall. Try to write a good note.
Perhaps when you have time, it will be useful to you to read FAQ, ABOUT and Guidelines regarding particularly on 800pixel and 300kb filesize limits. You will also start to use EDIT software to help you present photos here. I have some links here that you can download and use for a simple start.
For composition and some useful info, please click this link.
From your post entry, I can see you have a snap shot of waterfall and capturing it with straight style, placing the subject at center of the frame but with low dim light and foggy air. Perhaps you can use a bit of adjustment of brightness level, sharpening tool after resize and before upload, save the file to 800pixel max long side. But this a nice shot although I know you will need a lot of improvement to this photo to make it really striking.
For example, we will avoid
.the tree blocking the waterfall as main subject
.choose a location where no fog blocks a clear view
.perhaps a wide view if you find the risk too near to it
.try to use a tripod or other support
Hope to see more shooting and posting from you.
Greetings from Borneo.
tfs, bill
Photo Information
- Copyright: Rizwan Ashraf (richu92) (7)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2008-07-21
- Categories: Nature
- Exposure: f/4.2, 1/40 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2009-04-03 7:42








