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I like to capture real life moments
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BobTrips
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 555 W: 343 N: 74]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif){kind=small}
(1853) 2003-08-04 2:18
You caught a good pose, lots of concentration. And the lighting is interesting.
I think the shot would be improved by cropping away some of the area on the right and bottom. This would bring your subject more into dominance in the shot.
I've posted a Workshop for your consideration.
pirulesco
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(1942) 2003-08-04 4:39
Bonita foto... La luz es interesante... I also like the version BobTrips proposed...
Photo Information
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Copyright: Enrique Arellano (aragen)
![Silver Star Critiquer [C: 29 W: 3 N: 0]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-n.gif)
(81) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2003-08-02
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Kodak LS443, JPEG (Auto)
- Exposure: 1 seconds
- Details: Tripod: Yes
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Theme(s): TE Trieste exhibition: “Viaggiando Immaginando” [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2003-08-03 23:32
Viewed: 1224
Points: 2
