Photographer’s Note
Wandering out in the Arizona Dessert, Many Beautiful huge cactus.
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BlueRaven
(35) 2009-01-21 0:33
Hi Daniel,
You found a nice-looking saguaro here but I think the composition could be much better. For example, you cut off the top of the cactus and there's that other cactus on the left which is only partially in the picture, too. I think you should either have included it fully, or left it out completely. Taking some steps to the left might have helped. That way you also could have played with the shadow a bit.
Also, the picture looks a bit small to me (you can post up to 800 pixels on TE) and it could be sharper. Especially the top part looks pretty blurred to me.
Hope this helps! Best wishes
Claudia
Photo Information
- Copyright: Daniel Perez (danirez) (60)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2008-10-09
- Categories: Nature
- Camera: Nikon D50 Digital SLR
- Exposure: f/20.0, 1/160 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2009-01-20 8:33








