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Geometry
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Copyright: Dan Sochirca (deud) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 547 W: 9 N: 104] (1590)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2004-10-17
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Olympus Camedia C-765 UZ
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-10-18 5:34
Viewed: 941
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Trying something non-characteristic for me.
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Interesting graphic repetative shot Dan, I wish I could work out what it is.

I like the picture, the dirgonal lines - the hoizon and vertical lines. Great light and colour tone.

In personl i perfer not half cropping, so in both end, I would like another crop. Show you in workshop.

Regards Kaj Nielsen

Indeed a very nice try, I enjoy looking at this photo, nice geometry, hues, colours, shades.... but what is it, or better yet what were you trying to achieve with it?
As I mentioned it is a pleasing image for me, well exposed, balanced etc, however I don't see a meaning.
Peter

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  • Ebbe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2718 W: 784 N: 1886] (9366)
  • [2004-10-18 11:35]

A fine repetition excersize with a strong graphical impact.

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  • merpb Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 439 W: 96 N: 334] (1922)
  • [2004-10-18 16:08]

Clever rotation of the balconies Dan (the shadows give it away).
I like the soft creamy tones of the structure against the black of the balustrade which emphasizes the exact repetition in the metalwork as opposed to the diminishing repetition in the windows.

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