Photographer’s Note
Lamp on the Marburg Castle with the Elisabeth Church in the background.
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yuricle
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(936) 2003-07-29 17:46
You have picked an interesting subject: I know you have a great collection of lamp's shots :)
But this one lacks in composition.
First of all, it's too centered, where's too much sky and too little of the church.
I think you just have to climb the hill again and reexposure it keeping that in mind. :)
Guzman
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(577) 2003-07-29 20:48
I like this Lena, Yuricle is right about composition but I think by just cropping out a little on top and removing Elisabeth Church plus a bit more, added with some sharpness and contrast tweaks things would change for the better.
by the way welcome to TE.
chris85 (0) 2004-06-24 12:23
I dont think ive seen our church from this perspective before... must be ur sense for good photos!
Photo Information
- Copyright: Lena Matrosovich (Lena) (89)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2002-09-28
- Categories: Architecture
- Exposure: 1/100 seconds
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2003-07-29 16:38
