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Alone in Sabana


Alone in Sabana
Photo Information
Copyright: Jordi Diez (iamxa) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 229 W: 21 N: 191] (2588)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-08-10
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon EOS 500, 28-135 f/3.5-5.6 Ø72
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Children, Children of the world [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-03-23 3:37
Viewed: 1444
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Una em nena mira encuriosida a prop del campament de Kavak, al sud de la muntanya sagrada Aullantepuy. Al sud oest del famòs parc Natural de Canaima.

One child is looking to me into the sabana, in Kavak camp, close to the sacred mountain Aullantepuy. This is SW from famous national Canaima park.

Note, I published here this photo months ago, but I deleted because the legs are cutted, were more kids playing behind grass and there are something that I don't like in this one. Today I decided to put again to discover what is the mistake get me this feeling. I added the frame.

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beautiful picture, the kid is wonderful, his pose and expression are so charming. the composition with th kid on the side is very good, the background is interesting too, very nice picture

I don't remember that image Jordi, and I must say that I like it. I don't mind the way you did cut the legs. It's high enough, so it doesn't bother me. I love the composition.
Your frame is light.. Nice.

  • Great 
  • manny Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2980 W: 89 N: 4012] (21348)
  • [2004-03-24 7:45]

This is a lot better. I remember that picture which I also workshopped. Love the look on the face an dthe lighting. Her skin color is very nice too. Great shot!

This is really nice Jordi. I like how you have composed this with enough background depth to really feel the isolation. Natural pose of the child is also nice.

Well done!

Very nice!

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