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Copyright: Alan Turrell (Alan) (2)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-02-18
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Olympus Camedia C-1, Smartmedia 64MB
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): LightHouses of Uruguay [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-06-03 16:36
Viewed: 930
Points: 2
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Photo taken at approx; 5.15 in the evening at the end of a hot sunny day at Cabo Polonio, Uruguay.
This Picture is Copyright © of Alan Turrell.
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Dear Alan,
Welcome to TrekEarth (TE - always think people are referring to my name!).
The picture is well-framed but I have two comments.
First, the point of focus. Where was it? It looks as if it may have been at some point towards lower left. If you intended to get all or most of the stack in focus the first thing would be to get a high f number e.g. something like f16 or higher if available. Then experiement with focusing on lower the central points.
The other comment is about the light and contrast. It was, obviously, a brightly lit day but the result does not convey that. I would suggest more contrast be applied - this will highten then mass and volume of the picture.
Sorry to have gone to town with my critique!
Regards,
Tony Eden

  • Great 
  • donf (0)
  • [2004-06-21 18:08]

perspective great

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