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Copyright: gonzalo lujan (gon) (70)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-05
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D50, 18-55mm/3.5-5.6
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-05-27 22:30
Viewed: 708
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 14
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
two strange birds near of "abtao" submarine
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  • osse Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 375 W: 0 N: 14] (2713)
  • [2006-05-27 23:18]

Hi Gonzalo
Great composition. Great colours, details, sharpnes, DOF and POV.
Well done

osse

Some more notes would be good - telling us about the water below the branch. It is a very beautiful colour, and the birds are certainly very interesting. A very 'still' and sparse photo. Maybe the viewpoint could have been altered to improve it, but I don't know.
Regards,
Andrew

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  • partha Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1488 W: 85 N: 1293] (12832)
  • [2006-05-28 0:37]

Wonderful shot. Composition is simple and background is chosen well

Hello Gonzalo
Good simlified colors.
Maybe little bit slower position with camera gives better angle for birds, but many times you loose good background, so, this looks like fine.
Just a little tuning, you can try to clone that little knot-shadow away from water (down, under knot).
Background complementary color (and of course always red) gives more attention for those strange birds.
Regards
Jussi

Nice colors and very efficient composition. The clear graphism is great in this shot. Bravo.
M-H

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  • vts_ch Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 305 W: 68 N: 162] (2583)
  • [2006-05-28 17:12]

simple but extremly graphical, with a stunning color mastering.
Well done
Vince

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  • Luan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2011 W: 245 N: 1894] (15871)
  • [2006-07-03 1:51]

Perfect graphism in this picture, it's pure, it's looks like emarald. well seen Gonzalo, I like it well
Luan

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