breakfast

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• maciekda (19334)
• [2004-05-16 9:00]

hi Swiatek, interesting picture again, very original... the kid occupying a half of the blurred in the foreground - it is a bold composition. in fact I don't know whether it is a good picture or not, difficult to say.. I think it is a "love it or hate it" shot... and I like it a lot. cool stuff

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• davecall (575)
• [2004-05-16 16:11]

An interesting composition which is made more so by the dash of red in the background. I can't decide whether you should have had the boy in focus or not, but at least you have been imaginative and not boring.

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• Curioso (8904)
• [2004-05-18 7:47]

I believe that the red wearing is a bit distracting because we end up wondering if the strong node is the outer drawer or the red wear. I also feel that the back of the guy on the right does not add anything to the picture.

Interesting composition. That's a great try to have the foreground out of focus to draw attention on the characters in the background. I also like the texture and the luminosity very much. All in all, that's a good picture IMO, full of originality.

Welcome on TE Swiatek !

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• Luko (13481)
• [2004-05-22 12:20]

I like shots with depth stages, yours is one. Of course I would have prefered to see a bit of her eyes, may it be only a white dash, but it's still worth 2 points for the way you happened to frame her.

Now try to crop some 10 pixels on the top of the pic and you'll see how better it closes IMHO (there's some "open space" that decreases the graphical effet of the silhouetted edges of the characters).