a boy and a wall

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• venus (736)
• [2005-11-12 18:46]

Good composition. I like when the colours attracts my eyes.

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• ballyna (1689)
• [2005-11-12 19:24]

jimmy,
good colors and the old wall paintings make the pic.
regards

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• erdo (558)
• [2006-04-30 13:33]

this is like a picture a boy it attached to a colorfull flag. Well done.
erdogan

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• mfonda (889)
• [2006-05-26 13:22]

Hi Jimmy,

I like the idea here, but this shot doesn't really work for me. The boy is too far to the right, I'd like to see a little more of what is too the right of him, also it would help make him the main focus. Seems quite soft, as if it was taken from a moving car. Also, it isn't too level, and the boys facial expression and look is uninteresting.

I like the general idea here, but I think this shot could have been executed better.

Thanks for sharing.

- Matthew

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• folas (167)
• [2006-06-30 4:22]

Hi jimmy
very nice colours and their rectangular shape

Thanks for sharing
Fanis

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• rychousmama (407)
• [2006-10-10 23:49]

Absolutely beautiful. Amazing colors, simple composition with boy at the side. I just wish it could have posted larger and sharper!
-Lara

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• Jedenj (231)
• [2006-12-18 8:12]

Nice idea and nice colors, but technicaly not good enough regarding focus and colors. still it caught my eye.

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• jrmejias (243)
• [2006-12-18 8:35]

Hi Jimmy, really interesting shot, great composition. Welcome to Colombia (if you stay in this country now), I think you have a really interesting project in your life, about the travels. If you need support or some help in Bogotá, send me an e-mail and of course I will try to do something. JR

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• Fchierici (54)
• [2007-02-18 2:34]

Very good. It looks like a flag
Francesco

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• calimex (1029)
• [2007-02-20 13:59]
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