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I'm full, thanks


I'm full, thanks
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Copyright: Jordi Diez (iamxa) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 229 W: 21 N: 191] (2595)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-05-17
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D 70s, 18-70mm AF-S DX f/3
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-06-15 9:46
Viewed: 1470
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Una senyora al bonic poble Pueblito Boyacense, durant el seu esmorçar.

A woman is having lunch in a taberna of Pueblito Boyacense. She's waiting her colombian cofee, the "tinto".

Past to b&w and then duotone.

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That's a wonderfully pleasant expression on her face, Jordi...we can sure see what her favorite drink is! This is a portrait with a lot of life and soul, particularly in her eyes. The wooden table adds nice texture. Outstanding!

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  • joso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 751 W: 213 N: 257] (1782)
  • [2005-06-15 18:26]

One of those photos, where it is much more to see as it is shown - if one wants to see. There are lots of stories...
PP-work was worth

János

I'm pleased to see that you're using your fine new camera to create the lovely, atmospheric black and white images I've so appreciated from you in the past. These are especially fine when you focus on scenes like this, close to the people and the land.

I find myself wanting to tighten the composition to bring us closer to this woman's wonderful face. Before I read the note I assumed the fedora meant this is a man, yet the face is so lovely and feminine. Then I read the note and recalled other images from the region in which women wear hats like this.

I've posted a workshop to explore possibilities for a tighter composition. I love you work, as you well know, so we can consider this exercise as much for my benefit as yours. See what you think Jordi.

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