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padeg
(423) 2006-08-19 16:50
Hi felix,
I think it is an intructive photo for the suject you choose.
But technically, there are a few things to improve to my opinion :
1- The light and color controls : I made a workshop to show you what I mean
2- I think the framing too could have been better : avoid cutting the legs of that woman for example, you had plenty of space above her, you did not need all that sky.
3 - I suggest that you use the flash next time you make a photo like this one, to increase the presence of the personnage in front of the backgroung.
Interesting image anyway.
Pascal.
manatee
(4299) 2006-08-19 18:52
Me gusta la foto tneog amigos en Cartagena y monteria y me hablan mucho de las palenqueras.
Solo le quietaria la fecha. El Workshop que hizo pascal es muy bueno, tambien yo estoy comenzando y me esta apasionando mcuho, es muy interesnte y emocionante ver como tus fotos pueden mejorar.
Gracias por compartirla.
Hasta pronto
Elias
Photo Information
- Copyright: felix ballesteros (tayrona) (303)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2005-11-28
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/3.8, 1/45 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2006-08-19 15:11








