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fijiphil (1343) 2006-07-31 11:50

Jonathan, I like your shot, a different view of Rio. You have done well on the composition but there you need to improve the sharpness. I get the impression you didn't use a tripod. I'm not sure why you used such a tiny aperture, you could have got away with an f/8 or f/10 and still got the whole scene within your depth of field. Also, your horizon is leaning noticeably to the left. It would have been good to correct that.

agbonavita (0) 2006-07-31 13:15

Great photo Jonathan, I try to make some like that, but I can't gewt a result like your.

Take a look to these photos, was from the same place:
photo 1

photo 2

photo 3

I glad to see my Rio in photographers photos away from Brazil.

Thanks
Andre

MIG13 (0) 2006-11-12 13:22

Oi, Jonathan! Estou visitando suas fotos e gosto muito delas. Essa, por exemplo, dá uma visão original da Enseada de Botafogo, colocando em primeiro plano as pedras cheias de limo da orla da Urca e tendo o pôr-do-sol como pano de fundo. Muito boa! Parabéns! Abraço! Miguel.

dragonslayero (3106) 2006-11-12 14:52

Hello Jonathan

This is a quiet and calm view from Rio, I've never been there myself but compared to what I know this scene is a very different one from the tourist places I usually see.
The setting is very good, the rocks in teh foreground taking the attention and at the same time the very obvious sun is guiding the view in to the way back of the photo.
Thank you for sharing.

Odd Jarle