Slipper in the beach Photo

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Jabaquara Beach at Ilhabela City (it means beautiful island)...

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kinginexile (2440) 2005-04-25 18:49

Hey, Marcelo

Any chance we can put the background in the foreground and vice versa? :-))))
Good compo, for the fun of it, but why keep the barbed wire?

Ellinidis (140) 2005-04-25 18:56 [Comment]

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faraujo (1303) 2005-04-25 19:30

Olá Marcelo
Foi pena voce não ter usado por ex.:f/22, assim a garota fica mais nitida, deste modo não dá para ver a cor do olhos.
Mas quanto à foto excelente POV e cores.
Fotos destas só fazem mal a quem já está a precisar de férias.
Obrigado por este momento!
Parabéns
Filipe

Cougar (1750) 2005-04-25 20:38

Good composition. Is those slipper belonge to the lady. :-)

chaity (1539) 2005-04-25 20:55

Very nice compisition with the boats and the lady behind.

sarju (5308) 2005-04-26 1:03

Very interesting POV Marcelo
but I would say that the lonely thorny bush branch is a noise in the photo ... its taking away the focus from your sandals
great capture of the beautiful mermaid in the corner of the photo
cheers
sarju

carmem_busko (3635) 2005-04-26 3:33

A idéia é boa... mas os barcos e os caras na água não ajudaram...
Andamos perto... estivemos em boissucanga...
Da próxima vez, quem sabe combinamos um ponto de encontro?
Abraço!
Carmem

rbcy1974 (20742) 2005-04-26 3:41

Hi Marcelo, excellent and original idea, it reproduces the beach experience, dose off in the sun, wake up blury eyed, and this is what you see....

softflower (0) 2005-04-26 4:18

Jolie carte postale Marcelo !
Bravo, de belles couleurs et une bonne composition.
Nico.

betogrein (2232) 2005-04-26 9:32

linda foto, belas cores e bom conjunto. Parabéns...

Paker (2636) 2005-04-26 12:42

Great composition Marcelo. What bothers me a little bit is that stick in front of shoes. It is distractive and it spoils the composition as I don't know what is is exactly and where it is coming from or why it is there. The entire composition is very carefully composed and this 'stick' just does not belong there in my opinion.
regards,
KRzysztof

carobnica (1336) 2005-10-07 6:14

I like this compostion focused on this simple beach detail...
one great thing is that the view of the eye spreads in depth catching the whole beautiful scene...
nice
ciao
ana

Liekje (574) 2006-08-04 5:33

Nive POV, but a pity the shadow of the slippers is cropped/missing on the bottom of the picture. Also the branch is sort of a pity too, but I don't find it too disturbing.

Like the colour-contrast!

Framboisilla (5402) 2006-08-04 5:54

Hello Marcelo,

Photo originale avec cette paire de tongs en premier plan, au moins elle sont assorties à la chaude couleur du sable ! J'aime la composition avec la fille dans l'angle droit en haut, le cadrage est bien vu, les couleurs sympas !

Regards,
Stéphanie.

jone (3229) 2006-08-04 6:02

Hi Marcelo,
very good idea, beautiful photo...
regards,
J.

lespicaros (5518) 2007-10-23 3:21

Bonjour
Photo sympa mais dommage que le femme soit floue et que le ciel soit un peu pâle
Bonne journée
Laurent