Water and sand play together in the seashore
The man watches them
The water passes and sand stands alone...
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rigoletto (34279) 2013-05-26 9:34
Welcome to TE. I wish you an enjoyable time here.
I like the idea here, and especially your choice of including the man in the sea. It makes the story that you tell in your note. However, I need to tell you somethings to improve this photo:
1- Always try to keep the horizon horizontal. There is a slight tilt to the left.
2- Clouds are dangerous subjects for post processing. They can easily pop up from the sky with unwanted colors and washed out parts. Here the contrast created a weird cyan and some washed out white parts at the top.
3- Try paying attention to unwanted and irrelevant elemets in your cadrage. Ok, sometimes they work and can be there intentionally (the rocks on the left are good, imho), but you could crop out the top to get rid of that black thing (leaves?) at the top right.
I hope these basic suggestions will be usefull in your future photos.