Photographer’s Note
This picture is just a testing.
I felt a little bit creative.
I liked the alignment of the columns and the shadows.
What you think???
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Roly
(1960) 2005-08-28 16:51
I think it's very well seen, the angle you chose is effective and the composition rather pleasant. I wonder if a composition that would include more of the columns and less of the background on the left would be even stronger.
z_nenith
(214) 2005-08-28 16:54
Hello Pitai,
Good composition.
The shadow and yellow posts make the photo well balanced.Great shot.
Regards,
Tar
ishai
(4093) 2005-08-28 16:56
I agree with roly
A tighter crop on the left and top with a maybe a bigger frame would emphasize the great pillars and the perspective and the shadows on the floor
Well seen ( try it in photoshop, it’s a good exercise)
ishai
janmagneeriksen
(246) 2005-08-28 16:58
I think it is very artistic, great work, well seen.
Regards,
Jan
snuggleaphagus
(4140) 2005-08-28 17:03
beautiful work the rythm created by the cloumns and their shadow is wonderful. the light fixtures are an extra treat.
i really like the composition as it allows to have the everyday life and the graphical element of the columns.
alejandroguzman
(4672) 2005-08-28 17:23
viste, me hiciste caso a mi anterior post eh ???
buena composicion querido, y como aca tenemos tantas columnas en el pueblo, habra que sacarle el jugo !!!
alejandro
ajcsousa
(1804) 2005-08-28 18:17
Hi Gabriel,
Nice graphical shot. Well seen. Colours, light and shadows are great. About the composition i would also put more columns and less left side.
But it's a very nice shot.
Regards,
António
kinginexile
(2440) 2005-08-29 1:59
very nice, these columns have much presence as you composed, the colors are attractive, good balance added from the 3 vivid hues in the nackground and the shadows and the light help tremendously to make this shot outstanding. Beautiful work. Bravo!
bantonbuju
(48796) 2005-08-29 8:16
lamps, columns, shadows AND light make this a great photo, pitai;
i love this work;
very very good;
best wishes, jerzy
sergio1
(12150) 2005-10-05 4:04
Hola Gabriel,
Interesante toma del lugar. Las columnas combinado con las lámparas queda realemente genial. Y la composición está muy bien.
Saludos y gracias por compartirla.
Sergio.
kLe
(2039) 2005-10-06 12:47
Siempre intento hacer fotos cómo ésta, con objetos verticales alineados dando la sensación de estar juntos y... casi nunca lo consigo. Te felicito porque tu has conseguido un buen efecto visual de estas bonitas columnas. Quizás el fondo, con la pequeña tienda que vende tarjetas para el teléfono se puede mejorar.
munki
(1287) 2005-10-19 17:37 [Comment]
jkos
(981) 2005-12-05 8:15
Gabriel,
Excelente resultado para um "teste".
Ótimo POV e contraste de luzes
e sombras.
TFS,
Joel
Marlis
(2274) 2005-12-10 14:43
hello Gabriel,
I like the strong colors and the symmetry of the columns. The white globes add some tension. Very nice light and shadows.
Well seen- well done, I think it is a successful shot..
Marialuisa
quillo
(7312) 2006-03-16 11:04
Hola Gabriel, interesante foto con un buen equilibrio en el color y muy buena definición y, me gusta la verticalidad de las columnas con el amarillo intenso con sus farolas-globo como remate en blanco.
Un buen trabajo, felicidades.
Un abrazo. .......... Paco
Photo Information
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Copyright: gabriel mendez (pitai)
(3925) - Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2005-08-28
- Categories: Daily Life, Architecture
- Camera: Canon G3
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2005-08-28 16:33
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