Photographer’s Note
To my friend Claudio Gutmann
Machinist of my trips, To where do you take me today?
Will we run for old rusty rails of going and solitary returns?
Will we be able to stop in some village to steal a kiss from the platform?
Do you allow me to touch the bell of the Annunciation?.
I want to whistle, to whistle and to whistle, to call the angels of the railroad.
It is not important if it is my stop "The end of the World", if there is someone waiting there.
A mi amigo Claudio Gutmann.
Maquinista de mis viajes,A dónde me llevas hoy?
Correremos por viejos rieles oxidados de ida y solitarios regresos?
Podremos parar en algún pueblo para robarme un beso desde el andén?
Me permites tocar la campana de la anunciación?.
Quiero pitar, pitar y pitar, para llamar a los ángeles del ferrocarril.
No importa que sea mi parada el fin del mundo, si hay alguien esperando allí.
PJE, weswang, sergecross, plimrn, TeresaT, kermit350, vagabondtravels, s10001in, Emile, Izobretenik, emjleclercq, alejandroguzman has marked this note useful
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PJE
(19575) 2006-06-09 22:53
Rafael I love this closeup of yours. Excellent details and the capture on this face reveals his character very nicely. The bright red really adds a nice touch to this frame as well...thanks for sharing!
siolaw
(25890) 2006-06-09 23:12
Hola Rafael,
A nice portrait of that machinist, symbolizing travels! Nicely framed in his red train.Cental position is good here i think!
A nice poetic note
Well done Rafa!
Laurent
weswang
(18223) 2006-06-09 23:25
Hi Rafael, What a catch of the frozen expression of the driver. It is almost unreal looking. Nice framing and good contrast.
sergecross
(3438) 2006-06-10 8:18
Rafael, es un retrato muy interesante. No se si en blanco y negro se veria un poco mas dramatico pero es que realmente tiene un buen punto de vista y esta muy bien trabajado.
Sergio
plimrn
(19872) 2006-06-10 12:10
Hola Rafelito,
Your handsome engineer is well framed in his engine with the hillside in the window behind; I might have cropped the top and bottom so it would fit in the frame as there are few unique details in those areas. Very romantic note as well..Pat
TeresaT
(10733) 2006-06-11 10:46
Hi rafael,
Excelent idea of show us the machinist of this beautiful train.
This is a perfect close up.
The man looks very concentrate on his work.
Perfect colours and details.
well done my friend.
Regards
Teresa
kermit350
(8990) 2006-06-11 14:47
Buenos días Rafael, bonita expresión de esta mirada idealmente fija, y de un bonito natural, buena exposición, bien cordialmente
vagabondtravels
(6115) 2006-06-11 20:58
Hi Rafael
Great closeup. Nice color and detail. Very sharp. Nice work!
Ben
tucancr
(24) 2006-06-11 22:49
Hola Rafa,
Me gusta el retrato de Claudio, me gusta su gesto como si no existiera la camara. Buena composicion, Iris
imrek
(4) 2006-06-13 5:24
Hi Rafael,
nicely seen and composed portrait with very good quality..well done!!!
regards,
imre
andrewgg
(0) 2006-06-14 1:19
Hola Rafael.
Muy bien captado el momento.
Buen idea usar el rojo casi como un marco para el retrato.
Saludos,
Andrew.
Jribeirosantos
(1908) 2006-06-14 5:20
Hola Rafael!
Excellent portrait .. ful of expression!~
You're note is brilliant! :)
Cngratulations!
Besos
Joana
feather
(50560) 2006-06-14 8:35
Very good portrait; he looks as if he is studying all the gauges in the engine. The red of the doorway provives the perfect frame.
Kath
dsidwell
(9745) 2006-06-14 22:32
Hello Rafael. I like how this portrait also captures so much of this man's environment, too. Nice work!
Emile
(20177) 2006-06-16 1:24
Hola Rafael.
Muy buen "close up" del maquinista, esta muy bien captada, su expresion esta muy buena y me gustan mucho los contrastes de colores y definicion. Buen POV.
Felicitaciones.
josepmarin
(34269) 2006-06-17 6:56
Hola Rafael,
Ésta foto es un buen complemento a la anterior del tren del fin del mundo. Aquí podemos ver al maquinisa, al conductor de ese tren.
Muy buen retrato de tu amigo con la mirada hacia el infinito, y con el color rojo creando un marco a ambos lados. Un encuadre muy bien visto, y una buena realización, dan como resultado una composición excelente.
La nota es muy poética, como de costumbre, tienes mucho arte y sensibilidad en ese campo también.
Un saludo,
Josep
poulinp
(4464) 2006-06-20 20:56
Nice portrait. Very sharp, we can see clearly all the face of the machinist. Good work.
s10001in
(1487) 2006-06-29 3:41
Rafael, Great shot with wonderful pose.
Nice expressions.
Wonderful note.
TFS,
Shailendra
Izobretenik
(1264) 2006-07-03 4:01
Me gusta la idea que tu foto es una bella referencia a los que nos permiten de viajar. Su cara es muy interesante y, no es tan sharp que lo intentas ?, los colores son muy poderosas !
Excuse-me for my poor spanish.
Izo
emjleclercq
(14632) 2006-07-15 3:28
The portrait itsel in very nice, with good colors and excellent sharpness. One could regret that the man is not looking towards the camera, but in this case, I believe he is looking ahead at the rail so this provides a more dynamic attitude. The framing in the door is really excellent, and I especially like the view through the back window.
All the best,
Emmanuel
alejandroguzman
(4672) 2006-07-25 0:54
Hola Rafael...
excelente compo.... y un magnifico DOF.
hasta parece de cera este chofer!!! jejejeje
abrazos
alejandro
roconnell
(327) 2006-09-16 20:40
Beautiful Portrait. The lighting and look of concentration are wonderful. Well done.
Photo Information
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Copyright: Rafael Perez (rafelito)
(3645) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2006-01-22
- Categories: Transportation
- Exposure: f/4.9
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2006-06-09 21:55








