tormenta en la playa
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AnimeshRay (9087) 2005-03-16 22:59
Ahh, a classic composition, nature at its most impressive. Beautiful use of low horizon with regular geometrical foreground, with the sky taking over. Great color. I would have cropped a bit out of the right and the left edges.
Welcome to TE!
jstewart (1150) 2005-03-16 23:10
A truly amazing and dramatic sky. The foreground objects - what are they? It is important in TE to provide educational information about your subject matter, and also any technical info of relevance.
That small white part of an object on the left should be cropped out.
rmorillo (273) 2005-03-17 7:47
Impressive take. What a moment to have a camera!Your notes will help enhance the experience of the viewer complimenting the content of the photo. I agree that a bit of cropping of the distracting objects on both sides will improve the shot. Welcome to TE.
quillo (11850) 2005-09-20 13:13
Tu foto tiene fuerza, la fuerza de la naturaleza que tu has sabido captar en esta instantánea. Los colores adecuados con el motivo y un buen encuadre.
Enhorabuena por tu trabajo.
Un saludo .............. Paco.
OT12 (159) 2006-02-16 14:11
Very nice one, love it ! You must have felt crushed by the sky !
Deke (708) 2006-03-13 11:36
Interesting weather front with rain on the horizon, the scene lends itself to cropping for a graphic presentation using the three wooden structures (for lifeguards I imagine) more prominently. Terrific beach scene from the lovely city of Mar del Plata.
onmax (849) 2006-04-29 11:23
Muy buena toma julio, mucho dramatismo y terror en esas nubes.