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• Benedict (6419)
• [2008-02-15 20:54]
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ah, biktima ka rin pala ng deletion blues dito! katulad mo, ako rin ay naranasan ng ganito. kahapon lamang ang Valentine's foto ko ay tinanggal din..at 'twas not the first..:-(
anyway, no hurt feelings, Bai.

itong posting mo ay makulay pati ang mga ulap tila'y lumilipad din, natutuwa silang makasama ang mga ito dahil hindi kakulay at kahugis nila- mga "saranggola ni pepe"...

..matayog ang lipad ng saranggola ni pepe
matayog ang pangarap ng matandang bingi
umihip ang hangin, nawala sa paningin
sigaw ng kahapon, nilamon na ng alon
malabo ang tunog ng kampanilya ni padre
maingay ang taginting rosaryo ng babae
nay, nay, nay nay...

matayog ang lipad ng saranggola ni pepe
matayog ang pangarap ng matandang bingi
hinuli ang ibon, pinagsuot ng pantalon
tinali ng pisi, hindi na nagsinturon
dumaan ang jeepney at gumuhit pa sa kalye
mauling ang iniwang hindi na tinabi
nay, nay, nay, nay...

matayog ang lipad ng sarrangola ni pepe
matayog ang pangarap ng matandang bingi
lumuha ang langit at ang mundo ay naliit
pinilit umawit, ang naglaro'y isang inggit
kumakaway sa bakod ang anghel na nakatanod
sumusuway sa utos, puso'y sinusunod
nay, nay, nay, na.....

benedict

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• MLINES (9088)
• [2008-02-15 21:43]

Hi Renier, I like the wind-blown plants as foreground material and the coloured kites have very strong colours and shapes. It seems and ideal place for this event. TFS. Murray.

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• kri54 (1357)
• [2008-02-15 23:17]

superbes couleurs
beau cadrage
beaucoup de vent

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• baba_flies (4665)
• [2008-02-15 23:48]

Hello Renier! This is lovely and sometimes I do it myself but I do not have a teddy bear yet :) I like how you approached this photo with some grass in the foreground and the fluttering octopus above suiting the mood of the sky with these amazing clouds. Sometimes you really wonder why they delete this photo but leave others that might as well be deleted. All the effort, and now gone ... sorry to hear. Have a wonderful weekend, Barbara.

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• MarcT (14832)
• [2008-02-15 23:50]

Hi Renier,
Beautiful colors with those kites floating in the wind.
I would have tried to get the people also on the picture.
Cheers
Marc

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• jurek1951 (16421)
• [2008-02-16 0:30]

Hi Renier,
Excellent POV and composition. Great light and detail, and amazing colours.
Georg

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• evanrizo (21630)
• [2008-02-16 0:41]

Unbelievable!!!!!
The effect is so nice is so impressive, the wonderful sky helps very much to see the flying objects very very good, the contrast is excellent.
A clever framed image with all technical sides very evry good.
Bravo
Evangelos
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• Matthew-Watt (4167)
• [2008-02-16 0:44]

Hello Renier,

Shame about the deleted pic, I commented on it so at least you heard my positive opinions. I like this updated octopus’s garden photo, showing more of the kites further down the beach and towards the pier in the distance (which I think was the one in your previous post). It is a very pleasant scene. I am surprised to see no kiwi shaped kites, but after all they are not particularly aerodynamic ;).

Matt

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• robertosalguero (17357)
• [2008-02-16 0:46]

Hi Renier,

Too bad I didn't get to see the picture to judge for myself. I will have to check it out in TL. Kites are an excellent hobby for many people as they are si much fun to fly around during windy days. The colour contrasts created by the kites here is very good. The give the wonderful blue sky a nice addition. Good light and sharpness. Thanks Renier.

Roberto

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• Burberry1 (5334)
• [2008-02-16 1:10]

Wow! What a great summer touch which I miss a lot!
The contrast and perspective are simply fantastic.

Regards Renier, Agnieszka

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• hatti52 (11715)
• [2008-02-16 1:41]

Hi Renier,
excellent shot
amazing colours
i can feel wind
Have a nice weekend

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• zhelach (3460)
• [2008-02-16 1:42]

Hello Renier!
Lovely scene! Beautiful kites and sky! Very nice colors and details! Bravo!
TFS, Best regards, Zorica

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• cuneyt-sb (6946)
• [2008-02-16 2:16]

Hi Renier
What great capture of kites,
They looks amazing , very nice colors and very good result
TFS/Kind regards

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• pablominto (30561)
• [2008-02-16 2:17]

Hello Renier,
This is interestin gaction captured!
What adds interest value is the fact we don't see a single kiter as they are hidden behind the vegetation in the foreground...
A fine colour palette and a well balanced composition!
Greetings,
Pablo -

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• daddo (8128)
• [2008-02-16 2:34]

Hi Renier. Exhilarating shot. Uplifting PoV that makes our spirit soar with the beautifully coloured kites.The fact that those flying tha kites are not visible makes the kites appear as self-willed things enjoying the currents. Lovely work Renier. Regards. Klaudio.

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• jasmis (39017)
• [2008-02-16 2:34]

Fine photo which reminds me summer holidays. High quality, amazing note.
Regards.

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• vincz (17520)
• [2008-02-16 2:46]

Very nice. i love the colours I love the wind both on the kites and on the vegetation. A great one.

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• leo61 (32188)
• [2008-02-16 2:48]

Hi Renier!
Your POV is excellent and allowed you this wonderful composition.These colorful kites look great in front of this nice cloudformation.Colors and contrast are superb.
Regards,leo

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• ChrisJ (57351)
• [2008-02-16 3:05]

Hi Renier

A marvellous blue sky with interesting rippled patterns & marvellous overall contrast & lighting. Good colour & sharpness as well. Nice repetition of the kites with the red octopus stealing the show. Tfs!

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• jplebrun (10274)
• [2008-02-16 3:27]

Bonjour Renier
festival des cerf-volants à son meilleur sur le bord de l'eau, toute ces formes et couleurs dans le ciel font un beau tableau.
Amitiés
Jean-Pierre

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• baclama (2406)
• [2008-02-16 5:12]

hello,
very nice colors in the sky with good dynamisme (with wind)
good composition
vero

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• japiey (9339)
• [2008-02-16 7:08]

Hi Renier,

Ohhh... Am now in thoughts about the last post.. But I saw it in TL, and feel quiet happy.
This is something great , the colours flying in the blue sky..
Excellent shot, and good presentation.
Well done, dear friend.
Hope you are fine now.
All the best.

jp

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• photographer123 (4363)
• [2008-02-16 8:53]

hi..
mind blowing shot..you made my day....I add it to my theme..best wishes...subir

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• UnTrained (13568)
• [2008-02-16 9:28]

Hi Renier,
that was for sure a wonderful occasion. I had one festival several years before as I was less interested in photography and did not many and not good shots. Wonderful composition in colours and from the zoo of earth with the octopus and the bear. The grass inclusion is superb.
Not all heavy PP captures from others are detected by the mods and I tell only the posters if I think that this is wrong here. Yours was a bit heavy I think, but for sure less than others.
Lieben Gruss, Ulf

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• AiresSantos (26002)
• [2008-02-16 14:28]

Hi Renier
Wonderful colours and light in this fantastic composition. I like more this one compared with the white and black version.
Beautiful POV and details.
TFS and have a nice weekend
Aires

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• Paolo (40035)
• [2008-02-16 14:32]

Hi Renier, another wonderful one about kites!
this time it's colorufl, full of light but also with a similar great composition and POV.
thanks, ciao

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• Bruno40 (4824)
• [2008-02-16 22:09]

Nice photo Renier, wel composed and good colours.
I was about to give you some comments on your B&W photo, but when I tried it was gone.
I don't see the excessive PP.
I also suggest you leave the WS option active. Most of your photos are not actived.
cheers
Jorge

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• Photo65Net (32917)
• [2008-02-16 23:27]

Renier,
Nice job catching these colorful kites.
Resulting contrasts with that blue sky are superb, nice job,
Regards,
JB.

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• azaf1 (9391)
• [2008-02-17 0:37]

Hi Renier
Indeed those coloful kites are a pleasure to look at in a wonderfully clouded sky
TFS
Argiris

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• gunbud (18281)
• [2008-02-17 13:26]

Hello Renier,
The multi colored extraordinarly beautiful kites find a stunning and most perfect background blue sky with its wispy clouds making a stunning contrast to all the lovely colors of the inntricately designed kites. The tall green sea grass makes a most effective anchor to this lovely composition. Sorry to hear your leaving TE the term excessive PP can be miss leading because I have been rejected for the use of frames without straight edges and other mundane offenses that one would not associate as excessive PP. It will be a great loss and I feel that they should better explain the rules and use a category that does not fit excessive PP which one would think is over saturation etc.
Regards, Tom

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• efi (3772)
• [2008-02-17 13:36]

hi renier;
sharp,very colorful,perfect pov and cute..tfs.

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• edytungkal (3587)
• [2008-02-17 18:13]

Hello Renier,
Honestly i prefer this colour version than your pervious, its more dynamic with colourful kite on beautiful sky. A fascinating shot, i like it. tfs

daniel

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• bakes888 (12970)
• [2008-02-17 23:12]

Hi Renier. Excellent photo. I love the colours of this shot. That sky makes a great backdrop and the grasses a great foreground. I had a look at your BW pic on TL and the only reason I can think of for their actions is that perhaps it does look like an IR shot. Good luck on TL.
Catch you later.
Paul.

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• John_F_Kennedy (21192)
• [2008-02-18 0:40]

Nice reminder to the day when I was young and playing with my self-made kites. Brilliant POV to make this very interesting.
Best wishes,
Achim

PS: I think your last post has not more PP work then other picture or is for example HDR not a heavy PP work?

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• indraajeet (1579)
• [2008-02-18 1:15]

a capture par excellence. the sky becomes the sea with swimming octopusses
indrajit

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• jackart (4181)
• [2008-02-18 13:53]

Hello Renier!

Woow - this shot made in full color is great too! Very good framing and colors. Excellent dynamic shot!

Regards
Jacek

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• Tue (23905)
• [2008-02-18 16:18]

Hi Renier,
I'm sorry to hear your photo was deleted. I saw it on TE last Friday as well as just now again on TL, and I must say I didn't even think if PP when I saw it.
Back to this picture. Very nice one with those attractive and colourful kites against the partly cloudy sky. Good inclusion of the grass too.
Regards,
Lars

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• crckt (6815)
• [2008-02-18 18:39]

Hi Renier,
WOW! It's amazing, these kites. I like your POV a lot, the way you've composed this is perfect, I like the grass in FG. I am finding it hard to decide which one is better the earlier B/W or this color? Both of them are really nice.
Well done,
Shaeri

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• Budapestman (26813)
• [2008-02-19 1:01]

Hi Renier,
Fabled atmosphere with splendid composition, I like the fascinating coloured kites and the attractive POV, beautiful shot. Very well done! Have a nice day
George

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• brevbrev14 (20083)
• [2008-02-19 2:13]

Hi Renier, this red spot in the wonderful blue sky is stunning..
i like a lot also the foreground nd the composition..
very good!
ciao!
Valeria

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• bracasha75 (13834)
• [2008-02-19 2:35]

Hello Renier
Well i,m back on TE and i will thank you for great image and for your E-mail
This here i lovely hoby and all what men need is good will and good weater...TFS
Cheers,Braca

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• jhm (68158)
• [2008-02-19 3:18]

Hello Renier,

I find always very a pity that first many people gives his nice critiques and than remove this picture.
These colour picture is very nice also the octopus against the lovely sky make this picture attractive.
Thanks for sharing.

Best regards,
John.

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• danos (19676)
• [2008-02-19 5:13]

Hello Renier,
one more kite that contrasted perfect with the blue of the sky.The wonderful scene complete with the others kites.The colours and the light are superb.Informative your note too.

Regards,Danos

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• zeca (18280)
• [2008-02-19 7:24]

Hello Renier!
You played very well with this subject on both photos. In the first shot you´ve created something a little bit surreal, but here you show us the exact situation, with nice details, beautiful colours and the really excellent POV. Nice control of lights! The composion is absolutely great!
Regards,
Zeca

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• jaywalker (9621)
• [2008-02-20 10:40]

Hi Renier, A superb photo just like your other shot of kites, however this version shows the wonderful variation in the beautiful colours on display, again a great low POV &, it's superb the way they are spread across the sky, very well composed &, TFS, kind regards Wilson.

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• Gerrit (25818)
• [2008-02-21 9:12]

Hi Renier,
beautiful colours and light and a perfect sky.
Regards, gerrit

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• markogts (1102)
• [2008-02-22 13:45]

Two points for the idea of putting the grass together with the kite, with its fringes resembling the grass. But technically, there is a large margin of improvement: WB is on the warm side, there is some noise, and saturation could be stronger, given the playful content.

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• Scharan (12000)
• [2008-02-24 14:39]

Fantástica Renier!!!
Cores maravilhosas e composição linda.
GA
Vera

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• adores (12727)
• [2008-02-25 17:23]

Hi Renier!
Good shot! It must be a good moment to see all these colourful kites on the beach.I like the grassin foreground. Colours are very good and sky is really beautiful.

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• dip (9028)
• [2008-02-26 0:50]

Hi Renier,
beautiful colorful shot,good POV and framing,
Regards,
Dimitris.

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• Atousa (1800)
• [2008-02-26 6:12]

Salam Renier,
What a happy shot! although we don't see anyone clearly..its full of joy n colours..a lovely shot..tfs
Best wishes,
AtousA

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• Loic_bzh (5986)
• [2008-02-26 6:15]
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Hi Renier!

What? No more b&w shots?? Only kidding! ;-)

It would have been a pity to miss the colors of those kites...

Cheers,

Loïc

PS: I'm not surprised your (nice) last photo was deleted since you had already post it in color. We had a looooooong discussion about the same problem in the forum.

I hope you'll stay around and not only post in TL...

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• dareco (11335)
• [2008-03-01 22:56]

Very beautiful vibrant colors and sharpness. A HAPPY scene for sure! Nice pov. TFS

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• Karmenu (1354)
• [2008-03-02 9:17]

Hi
what alovelty shot you had captured. Interesting kites. I have never seen like these.
Good photo quality also.
my compliments
Charles

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• barni (10264)
• [2008-03-03 11:15]

Hello Renier
Absolutly beautiful.
The kites are beautiful colours and the coulds is perfect.
Regards
Christophe

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• jpphoto (461)
• [2008-03-04 14:51]

Hello kiwi ,
excellent , les couleurs du ciel es du cerf-volants ajouter de nuages très sympa A+ jpphoto

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• Charo (19264)
• [2008-03-04 16:17]

Hola Renier,
Bellas cometas volando ante un cielo precioso y luciendo su gracilidad y bonitos colores.
Estupenda y alegre toma con muy buena luz y definición.
Bien hecho
Cordialmente
Charo

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• Cricri (29915)
• [2008-03-14 15:02]

Hi Renier,
Une belle image d'un des plaisir a la mer, içi un grand moment et une belle prsie de ces cerfs volant colorés donnant un beau contraste avec le ciel, beau cadrage, compliment
A bientôt
cricri

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• ruisc_pt (5091)
• [2008-03-19 14:48]

appealing and great image with a very nice background
TFS Renier

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• Chanizard (95)
• [2008-03-22 20:54]

Hi Renier ..
Nice shoot
interesting picture with it's comment
with regards

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• captainsgirl (3446)
• [2008-03-28 4:34]

Hello Renier,
What a colorful photo! great pov from behind the grasses and including the pier, Makes me long for summer!!
TFS
Donna:o)

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• Cutajar (285)
• [2008-03-31 1:09]

Great shot,
I really like it.
Great sharpness and lightings.

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• gildasjan (14854)
• [2008-03-31 2:13]

Bonjour Renier
Du mouvement et de la couleur avec ce ciel et ces cerfs-volants.C'est bien vu avec les nuages.
Bonne journée.
Amicalement
Gildas

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• saylan-cb (8873)
• [2008-03-31 2:32]

Hi Renier
Superb photo!Great colours and compositions,details is very good.
TFS/Regards

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• ls7902 (4777)
• [2008-03-31 20:53]

Hello Renier,
Great photo of the flying creatures. I like the octopus & bear. Nice framing with the foreground grass ... nice effect to emphasize the direction of wind & how the kites are holding up above. So when are you coming back to TE? I have only some photos posted in TL some time ago ... those deemed "suspicious" to appear on TE. Best Regards. Latiff.

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• Angshu (25494)
• [2008-04-01 0:58]

Hello Renier
Your last post for quite a long time...hopefully we can see some new post from you soon from your beautiful country. An amazing picturisation of the kites against the marvellous blue sky with interesting rippled clouds. Good work!
Regards
Angshu

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• ag1993 (616)
• [2008-04-01 7:17]

Hello,
Very nice shot. Graet colours and atmosphere.
Regards
Andrea Gatt

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• devimeuxbe (47561)
• [2008-04-02 1:50]

Hi regnier
Beautifull show on this sky
the touchs of colors are amazing
Well done
Bertrand

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• marietom (21138)
• [2008-04-02 6:22]

Hello Renier,

fantastique composition, avec ces cerfs volants qui luttent contre le vent... Belles couleurs aussi. Bravo !
Marie

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• paura (23441)
• [2008-04-24 2:52]

Renier,
Beautiful colorful composition here. Details and composition are really nice. well done.

Abraço

Paulo

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• salvator (17363)
• [2008-04-29 1:31]

Hi Renier,
Wonderful color in the sky with the clouds, and superb the colors of the kites to fill the sky. The motion left from the wind of the bush, the sharpness and details are superb.
Best regards. Salvator.

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• colibriav (1247)
• [2008-06-13 1:38]

Hola:
Preciosa fotografia, tiene nubes, cielo, mar.... Una perfecta combinacion de colores y naturaleza.

Un saludo desde España:

Pablo

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• jmdias (8905)
• [2008-07-14 17:35]

renier

beautiful the colored kits in the sky and the shapes of the plants bellow showing the power of the wind too. It is a nice work with a good pov, colors and light

hugs

jorge

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• Stepan (26365)
• [2008-08-01 12:09]

As if the kites were flying all together in a same direction... Strange and poetic !!
Excellent.
Stéphane