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Ohau Clouds


Ohau Clouds
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Copyright: Renier Figuracion (kiwi_explorer) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1960 W: 92 N: 2763] (12183)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-10-21
Categories: Nature
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Skyscapes II [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-01-05 12:59
Viewed: 1272
Points: 118
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
In my previous posting, I tried to portray the interesting aspect of clouds worth considering when composing a shot. I find the sky like an ever changing work of art ... like a painting constantly in progress.

I took this shot way back October but didn't really appeal to me posting this in TE because I didn't appreciate the beauty of clouds then. This was taken close to sunset but facing East. Lake Ohau is surrounded by mountains thus it does not have the direct view of a rising or setting sun. But if there are big clouds present in the sky, chances are the sunset/sunrise colors will be reflected, thus ending up a colorful sky. I have posted another shot of this sunset scene in the Workshop taken half an hour later. That one has more colors in the clouds which might appeal to other viewers. I was not sure which one is better, but I choose this one because my main theme is all about clouds. Hope you like it.

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  • barni Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1743 W: 92 N: 1777] (10848)
  • [2008-01-05 13:00]

Hello Renier
Incroyable ces nuages au dessus des terres.
Regards
Christophe

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  • carper Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 9657 W: 445 N: 15935] (56364)
  • [2008-01-05 13:03]

wauw what a sky reinier,
fantastic and the low horizon is fantastic a very good phoot, I like it a lot, good one, have a nice day.
gr. jaap

Superbe cadrage laissant une grande place à ces nuages impressionnants. J'aime beaucoup la lumière. Beau travail.
Xavier

Hello Renier!
Amazing clouds! Good colors and composition! Bravo!
TFS, Best Regards, Zorica

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  • delic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1368 W: 64 N: 1844] (6574)
  • [2008-01-05 13:09]

Hello Renier,
You are becoming the master of clouds on TE. Hard to pick between this and the one in WS. They are both quite dramatic with light and the cloud formations. I think I would have liked the main photo cropped similar as the WS, that is without the top half. But never mind, it's very nice as it is. Regards,
Hakan

Hi renier
What an impressive cloud ! the contrast is very beautifull. Amazing spot of light on the mountain.
All the best for you in 2008
Bertrand

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  • bizsu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 229 W: 0 N: 150] (1571)
  • [2008-01-05 13:18]

Hi Renier,
Fantastic sky. This photo was very good, congratulate. Good colours, good the setting. He is a sharp picture. TFS.
Gretting, Zsú

Hello Renier.
Impressive an atmospheric aspect. You have caught with your lens a beautiful composition, flood of realism, light and contrasts. Congratulations
John

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  • danyy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 7613 W: 448 N: 10779] (54821)
  • [2008-01-05 14:37]

Bonjour Renier,
un ciel exceptionnel qui méritait d'être réussi.
Le cadrage lui donne beaucoup d'importance, il le mérite.
Dommage qu'on ait pas les données de prise de vue.

Bien à toi.
daniel.

Hi Renier,
It look like Dutch clouds. But hey, New-Zealand is named after the Dutch province Zeeland, so it could be ;-)
A fine impressive image with spectacular cloud formations with great depth. Framing is exactly how i would make it...perfect low horizon and all clouds on top...wonderful.
Regards, Henk

Hello Renier,

I think this shot is beauty! The very low horizon emphasizes the massive size of the cloud formations and sky. New Zealand is renowned for its cloud cover, so they can make some sensational shapes and patterns. I visited so many lakes in NZ, so I can not specifically recall visiting Ohau, what town is it closest to? I think that perhaps a little more sharpness in the lower section would boost the appeal a bit. I think I will try a workshop to see how I would interpret the photo. It is a good one, thanks for posting :)

Will you allow me to post a workshop?

Matt

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  • Norte Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 134 W: 5 N: 124] (531)
  • [2008-01-05 17:49]

Hi!
What an incredible sky with clouds in several layers!
Good light and colors.
TFS
Regards, Jon

Hello Renier,
Very fine composition of this beautiful cloud formation!
superb pov with good clarity, colouration and details
great job indeed
cheers
Tony

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  • gunbud Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 4607 W: 4 N: 4484] (20064)
  • [2008-01-05 20:35]

Hi Renier,
Magnificent cloud patterns captured in this lovely mountain landscape. The bit of rich snow light around the mountain top the beautiful glimps of blue sky contrast beautifully with your intricate clouds. A beautiful mysterious moment seen here.
Regards, Tom

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  • Manamo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 830 W: 151 N: 753] (2976)
  • [2008-01-05 21:00]

Hello Renier,
It's a nice panorama covered by impressive clouds. I agree that the clouds are nice. however, I'll go against the crowd here and tell that you went a bit too far on that one. The landscape is a panoramic one and so, think it calls for a horizontal picture. So, I think there is too much cloud in the original version. I would have cropped exactly the way you cropped the workshop. My opinion is that it gives more power either to the clouds AND to the landscape...In the original post, the clouds are lost in the space somehow...
I think it's a good shot. Best regards,
Marc

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  • Graal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4922 W: 138 N: 532] (45390)
  • [2008-01-05 23:47]

Hi Renier,
unusual clouds, nice landscape and good idea on composition. Well done.
Gr., Aleksander

Hi Renier,
fantastic sky. Beautiful picture
with those amazing clouds and perfect colours and light.
Congratulations.
Regards,
Costantino

Hi Renier,

The vertical frame makes a great impact here. Strange formations of clouds...That plays the symphony , in its peak.
Well done.

jean paul

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  • ChrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 8565 W: 916 N: 11537] (57444)
  • [2008-01-06 1:05]

Hello Renier

I like the 'big sky' effect here, & the superb colour & tonal range. Good sharpness & pov. Tfs!

Hello Renier,
This is a positively wonderful cloudscape, well worth posting on TE. I like also the shaft of light over the top of the mountains. Excellent colours and clarity.

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  • danos Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3653 W: 84 N: 5517] (21510)
  • [2008-01-06 1:47]

Hello Renier,
heavy clouds ready for thunderstorms! The silhouette of the Mt that fall a little bit light adds something different in the scene.Excellent the gamut of the colours.Informative your note about this sunset.

Have a nice Sunday,danos

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  • dip Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1561 W: 0 N: 937] (9158)
  • [2008-01-06 1:52]

Hi Renier,
impressive view,amazing sky well captured and framed!
thanks for sharing,
Dimitris.

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  • ifanik Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1643 W: 52 N: 3036] (16900)
  • [2008-01-06 2:31]

Hi Renier
Very beautiful photo of this wonderful sky with nice colours
Best regards
Nick

Hello Renier. Another cloud picture, - a sky landscape. I think, clouds am always interesting for the viewer. Either one discovers faces or fable animals, or one is simply impressed of the Dramatik of the clouds. You caught this cloud formation as well as the landscape at the lower contour very well. Best regards, Wolfgang.

Bonjour Renier
belle composition de ces montagnes et surtout de ce ciel nuageux bien vu et bien rendu, bravo.
Amitiés
Jean-Pierre

Renier,
Amazing sky you caught here !
Your choice to frame the entire picture with it was great, this image is so pleasant, with lots of dynamics.
Regards,
JB.

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  • Muse Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2484 W: 199 N: 5919] (25915)
  • [2008-01-06 8:30]

Hi Renier,
In first, I wish you a happy new year.
Un magnifique ciel et une superbe photo. Le pov avec cette chaîne de montagnes qui se fond aux nuages est tout bon.
AMicalement,
Denise

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  • Cricri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4757 W: 232 N: 6628] (31604)
  • [2008-01-06 9:11]

Hi Renier,
Belle capture de la lumiére et scéne des nuages
un ciel impressionnant trés bien présenter, compliment
Friendly
cricri

Hello Renier!

Great Idea of framing. This big sky and great clouds looks magnificent and it is main attraction Your composition. Well done!

Best regards and Happy New Year

Jacek

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  • Tue Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5185 W: 56 N: 7505] (24138)
  • [2008-01-06 16:06]

Hej Renier,
Great capture of this beautiful sky. The clouds look wonderful and the lighting is also very nice and pleasant. I like the inclusion of the small strip of land in the bottom of the photo too. Well done!
Regards,
Lars

Hello Renier,
Again, a dramatic clouds captured with fantastic mountain view below, i really like this shot. Well done friend..tfs

daniel

Hi Renier. Those big spectacular clouds of yours certainly add a lot of drama to this scene. The polarized(?) sky gives the clouds a little more definition also. Well captured and thanks for sharing.
Cheers, Paul.

Another wonderful sky very well captured, dear Renier !
I like your POV and colours
TFS and have a nice week
Aires

Ciao Renier,
Amazing clouds! Good colors and composition.
i like the your ws and this of Matt.
good job
Giorgio

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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 12760 W: 273 N: 17393] (70015)
  • [2008-01-07 4:50]

Hello Renier,

Not every day can you find this wonderful sky, with excellent clouds formations.
Very well different between the clouds and the small part blue sky.
Nice composition and colours, thanks for sharing.

Best regards,
John.

Hi Renier
Wonderful sky...
Very good light and atmosphere...
Excellent work...
TFS/Regards

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  • stego Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3726 W: 621 N: 5230] (16692)
  • [2008-01-07 12:15]

Hi Renier,
Such a sky would scare the chief of the village of Asterix to the death. :-) It's so gorgeously dramatic!... If I see it right, this one should be classified also as a 'decisive moment' - a minute before and the sun would still lit the all mountain of the BG; a minute later and all of it will be in the shadow. Having only half of it under the sun makes the photo very special, although that amazing sky is enough for making the photo stunning.
Bravo!
Regards, José.

Hi Renier, superb sky with wonderful clouds, great colors, beautiful composition, very well done, ciao Silvio

Hello Renier
Big amaizing sky...
Excellent
Cheers,Braca
All best in new 2008

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  • Charo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2637 W: 22 N: 5433] (21393)
  • [2008-01-07 16:31]

Hola Renier,
Impresionantes nubes con muy buenos detalles. Un bello paisaje con cierto dramatismo. Excelente luz y colores.
Cordialmente
Charo

hi renier,
hanga ako sa kuha mong ito, renier. and mga ulap pati na ang kulay ng mga ito ay hindi nakakasawang tingnan! maganda, wala nang iba pa! ang mga workshops ay pareho ding mga trabahong de kalidad! sulong kapatid!!
benedict

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  • Didi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6591 W: 3465 N: 8269] (30442)
  • [2008-01-08 0:22]

Hi Renier
Wonderfull dramatic sky; nature also is a good artist.
You were present to show us this interesting moment.
The WS also is well done
Cheers.

Hi Renier,

happy new year!

Those clouds are amazing... A great shot!

Cheers,

Loïc

Renier,
tis images with imense clouds and only a small strip of landscape in the very bottom are always a real attraction for my eyes. What makes this here even better is the sunlight only on the top of the mountains.
Peter

Hi Renier,
amazing clouds
great light management and depth
best wishes

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  • adores Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2761 W: 53 N: 4015] (13251)
  • [2008-01-10 16:24]

Hi Renier!
Wonderful photo! Amazing the size of the clouds comparing to the mountains below. Wonderful light, you got it even on the top of the mountains. Excellent pov!
I also like the one in the workshop, it's very good, but I guess this one is more unusual and impressive!

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  • vincz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2964 W: 85 N: 5038] (17528)
  • [2008-01-11 0:37]

Fantastic sky, great choice of square composition giving so much space to this immensity. Great light and colors. Very well done!

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  • Angshu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5233 W: 179 N: 8170] (26594)
  • [2008-01-11 0:39]

Hello Renier
The clouds are wonderful with the play of sunlight on them. We can see at least two different types of cloud formations here and the highlight on the hill tops, which stand out more clearly. Good work with the low horizon to emphasize on the clouds. Well done!
Regards
Angshu

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  • JCG Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3544 W: 463 N: 5130] (18422)
  • [2008-01-11 11:40]

Hi Renier,

The mountainous landscape seems crushed by this impressive cloudy mass. Good choice of the format vertical to give all his value to this splendid sky, I like much Renier, cheer.

With all my friendships and a very good WE,

Jean-Charles

Hello Ren,
Awesome clouds. I like your cloud theme lately. I agree they are ever changing and never the same. It's like nature's work of art in progress. A good vista of Lake Ohau. My best regards, Danilo

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1662 W: 135 N: 2338] (10675)
  • [2008-01-14 1:12]

JUST UNBELIEVABLY BEAUTIFUL
No words
to describe its beauty
Compliments my friend
Argiris

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  • parbo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1883 W: 15 N: 2179] (7813)
  • [2008-01-14 16:47]

Hello Renier,

What a huge sky you captured! I like sun lights on mountains tops and of course gorgeous cottons on sky a lot. Incredible.

Friendly Regards,

Ertugrul

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  • coco Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4117 W: 144 N: 5058] (23809)
  • [2008-01-15 16:32]

Hi Renier.

Really these clouds are amazing and I love them.
Your composition is good and you give us a wonderful chance.

Regards.

Oh I love this kind of spectacular skies, those giant clouds are so impressive and the proportions are well seen with the dwarf mountains below...
Bravo !
TFS,
Cath.

Olá Renier

Gosto de fotos onde a grandeza do céu se destaca merecidamente como aqui nesta foto. Bom olhar...parabéns!
GA
Vera

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  • crckt Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1400 W: 68 N: 1315] (6835)
  • [2008-01-19 20:02]

Hi Renier,
A very interesting capture of clouds. The way you captured this gave a 3D effect to it, which is really nice.
Thanks for sharing. Have a great weekend.
Regards,
Shaeri

Hello Renier,
Impressive cloud formation!
Subject is well exposed with good details in the clouds, showing the variation from the darker to the brighter parts well...
A well composed presentation, with wise emphasis to the sky!
Greetings,
Pablo -

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  • kiks Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 728 W: 114 N: 586] (4426)
  • [2008-02-29 3:37]

Hi Renier, i'm glad you decide to share this one with us. The clouds are so amazing and i love the way the sun shines at the top of the mountain at the bg.
Tfs
KIks

merhaba dear ranier
magnificent sky and clouds.magnificent atmosphere and colours.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

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