At the spurs moment, a photo from Canterbury, South Island

Photographer's Note

Shot this while walking along the rocks in Peninsula Seal colony.

Kaikoura is a town on the east coast of the South Island of New Zealand. It is located on State Highway 1 180 km north of Christchurch.

Kaikoura has now become a popular tourist destination, mainly for whale watching (the Sperm Whale watching is perhaps the best and most developed in the world) and swimming with or near dolphins. There is also a large and readily observed colony of Southern Fur Seals at the eastern edge of the town. At low tide, better viewing of the seals can be had as the ocean gives way to a rocky base which is easily navigable by foot for quite some distance. -- Wikipedia --

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CLODO (24902) 2011-11-23 1:42

Hi Eugene

I know you want to learn photography, so I am going to critique this post to give you some advice.
On my screen, the picture is not sharp. Then you had 3 children but 2 out of them are hidden, and the one who is looking at you is right in the middle of the picture. To try to enhance the shot (only the 3rd remark), you should cut the left part close to the pink cloth (uninteresting area).
Greetings
CLODO