Photographer’s Note
Once childrens voices rang as they spun on the tyre. Now the old home is overgrown with blackberry, the grass is rank and the tyre still except for when the wind blows.
The townships slowly coming to life again but has had many hard times.
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swavek
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(127) 2008-03-26 16:12
hey Kay. the photo is nice and natural. i would prob crop it from the top. the tree's branch takes too much space in the picture, almost dominating in the composition. you have very nice fence in the background with the blackberries, they much more interesting then this big branch and if you cut your pic 1/4 of the lenght from the top, the nice background will be more "visible", i guess.
the place looks a bit abandoned and you described this nice, but i would really like to see a small kid by the "swing", kind of a new generation at the "old" place. you can use a packet of sweets, as a bait, to bring kids over the place, it usually works:). take care.
Photo Information
- Copyright: Kay Shear (Kay01) (53)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2008-03-00
- Categories: Decisive Moment
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2008-03-26 0:53
