Photographer’s Note
Pelicans at the Onkaparinga River Mouth.
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(2821) 2008-08-08 4:27
Hello Mark,
This is actually a good shot of the decisive moment. But I think there are a couple of things that I would like to comment:
- the horizon is tilted
- some of the seagulls are half cropped
- a little less of the featureless FG water would be better, I believe.
I have done a WS to deal with these. A few of the half seagulls were cloned out in photoshop. Hope you like it.
Cheers
Alfred
Photo Information
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Copyright: Mark Hunter (Hubba)
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(346) - Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-00-00
- Categories: Nature
- Camera: SONY Cyber-shot DSC-F717
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2008-06-08 23:38
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Points: 2
