A winter's day at Erskine Lagoon, Mandurah Western Australia.
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richtbw (71) 2012-02-02 0:26
First impression was that of a painting. Good DOF while colour gives the feel of winter. Foregrond with bridge leading towards right, makes one wonder what lies further to the rght - more water?
Just a thought, what if you were to crop a bit of the sky? - nah maybe not.
ifege (10367) 2012-02-02 1:07
Long time no see! (although checking your activity you did a bit of psoting while I was out of the country late last year).
A good one with subtle colours for a good panaoramic photo - great textures and colour.
macondo (19483) 2012-02-02 1:16
Haven't see you around here for a while.
Good to see this very nicely exposed lanscape. Nice proportions, well placed bridge, a bit of foreground interest in the grasses bottom left, and well defined sky. The bridge looks rickety, the area flat and not too intruded upon. I've been to Mandurah a couple of times but haven't seen this lagoon. Very atmospheric. My only suggestion would be a slightly higher horizon, but I like the panoramic crop.