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Como uma onda no mar...


Como uma onda no mar...
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Copyright: Flavia Soares (Flavia) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1693 W: 96 N: 1824] (7417)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08-09
Categories: Nature
Camera: Cannon EOS 30D, Canon EF 18-55mm, HOYA 55mm UV
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-05-14 6:45
Viewed: 366
Points: 16
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
"A vida tem mil ondas como o mar como um ir e vir do infinito.
Nada do que foi sera de novo do jeito que ja foi um dia.
Tudo muda o tempo inteiro no mundo.
Nao adianta fugir nem mentir para si mesmo agora, ha tanta vida la fora aqui dentro sempre, como uma onda no mar..."

Life is like a wave, full of comings and goings, its what says this Braziliam music that I like so much. Each moment is unique, like those waves with different shapes and intensity.

On the WS slightly different POVs and compositions. Let me know which one you prefer.

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Flavia, I like the shot, which is a little underexposed in a good way - it allows the white foam of those waves to retain detail and for the colours to retain richness. You have a good perspective effect looking along the shoreline. However, the shot is rather tilted to the right. Perhaps I would have used the dodge tool in Photoshop to lighten the 'island' just off the shore, to bring back some detail in it.
Regards,
Andrew

Flavia,
the different moods that you got of this place are simply fantastic. I love this dark, dramatic weather with the inclusion of the braking wave. Why tilting it so much?
Peter

Olá Flavia,

gostei de ver as diferentes imagens do mesmo local. Eu particularmente gostei mais da versão +light. Está mais chamativa justamente pelo seu tratamento. Esse aqui está com a linha do horizonte inclinada, mas poderia ser facilmente corrigida no ps. De qualquer forma é um interessante registro dessas bonita praia. Bom trabalho!
Abraço,
Carlos

Olá Flávia,
Gosto desta composição com a praia e ondas em primeiro plano e os rochedos ao fundo.
Prefiro a Altered Image #2 porque tem mais luz.
Fiz outro workshop, para dar mais vivacidade; endireitei a imagem, que está um pouco inclinada.
Um abraço,
F

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  • quillo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1144 W: 213 N: 990] (4948)
  • [2008-05-14 12:59]

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Hola amiga . . . . la foto es muy hermosa, las olas rompiendo en la playa y ese cielo de nubes grises hace de tu composición una imagen muy poética, como la nota.
De las tres la que más me gusta es esta, sin duda.

Felicidades por el cuadro y por la nota.

Un abrazo.

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merhaba dear flavia
magnificent atmospher and composition.magnificent beach and waves.well done.
best regards.
gürkan akçakır.

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  • Didi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6159 W: 3196 N: 7475] (27842)
  • [2008-05-16 2:54]

Bonjour Flavia
Avec les Falaises d'Etretat ce coin est aussi attractif.
Ambiance dramatique, une correction d'assiette a été déjà faite à tribord (droite) en WS, je préfère cette version par rapport à celle en WS.
Amitiés.

Hi Flavia,
You have really captured the feeling of just before the storm or after the storm????
A good idea to give this:life is like a wave
full of comings and goings,its what says
the BRAZILIAN MUSIC...very poetic photo
full of romantism
Thanks for sharing
COSTANTINO

Salut Flavia,
Belle perspective donnée par cette vague qui mène le regard vers le fameux rocher, belle luminosité qui avec ce ciel gris bleu donne une atmosphère dramatique à ton image, petite remarque, l'horizon penche un peu ... Le premier WS plus lumineux est intéressant mais peu êtree l'idéale serait entre les deux présentations.

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