My brother in Lake Superior Photo

Photographer’s Note

My brother standing in the evening waters of Lake Superior with the sun behind a cloud.

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osmarq (877) 2007-01-09 21:21

Beautyful sky shine, but a couple of recomendations, 1. The central subject should be placed in the right side of the frame to balance the image 2. You cut his feet you could have given the composition a little more of ocean and a little less of sky.
regards,
Oscar.

batalay (21416) 2007-01-09 21:21

Hello John,
Welcome to TE, the most addictive site in cyberspace. I like your photo very much, with the sunburst effect providing a powerful backdrop, and producing a silhouette of your brother. One suggestion to improve it is to make sure that his feet are not cut off, that the camera should be aimed a little lower, so that he is about 1/5the of the way above the lower part of the image.

Nonetheless, this is a good photo, that can be improved a little.

Regards from Virginia,

Buletn

chados (38) 2007-01-09 21:24

Hi John,
And welcome to TE

I like the dominating blue color and how clear is the picture.
Good POV

Regards,
Plamen

bakes888 (18353) 2007-01-10 1:08

Hi John. Welcome to TE. Great photo, you certainly captured the moment. Well composed and thanks for sharing.
Cheers, Paul.

braveone (110) 2007-01-10 3:47