warren

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• maciekda (19330)
• [2004-04-22 3:21]
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great portrait, wonderful expression - this dreaming smile... the composition is almost very good - for me there is too much space on the left side and his fingers are cropped on the right side - should be more balanced. anyway, mooody shot.
what about the note? who is this guy?

ladnie, ladnie, tylko o co tu chodzi? ;)

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• piozac (2050)
• [2004-04-22 3:48]
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Mi się też podoba. Fajny wyraz na twarzy Warrena. Ja też bym trochę inaczej kadrował, przesunał bym kadr trochę w dół i w prawo, żeby było widać cały ten sprzęt co mu wisi na szyi i całą lewą rękę.

Ale generalnie fota git. Fajny, klimatyczny portret. Pozdro

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• merpb (1922)
• [2004-04-22 6:34]

Great portrait, the crop, pose and ballance are great. The sky is a touch flat and imo could hold some more punch and there is something right at the back of his head behind his ear that is causing a loss of definition.
Minor points.

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• Curioso (8902)
• [2004-04-27 18:05]

Agree with Maciekda but that's a nice portrait !

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• Luko (13479)
• [2004-05-01 13:43]

that portrait is top notch!! really... This is the kind of expression that puts a smile on your own face.

I don't care much about the crop finders since the guy is turning his face towards the right hand side, it goes into the general movement.

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• jcandeli (40)
• [2005-07-29 10:10]

Awesome portrait! Great expression and lighting. Good composition too. Excellent job!! JP