wedding in central park

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wedding in central park
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Copyright: Carolyn Hall (carolynanna) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 159 W: 20 N: 24] (1324)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-04
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon FM10, 24mm, Illford FP4
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-06-02 14:37
Viewed: 895
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I dont know who these people are, but a fleeting look at a couple who like many others, celebrate a wedding in central park
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another good one, in your style, love the guy with a big a$$ camera, he seems to "love" his job.
Peter

Superb shot! I admire your ability to get so close to your subjects. Wonderful tonal range.

hello Carolyn
i like this shot
it remind me some picture from the 5o's or 60's
your composition is also very good and realy dynamique.
nice black and white also
i just wonder why you have so much grain with the FP4
well done a beautifull shot
regards
••simon••

  • Great 
  • ishai Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 701 W: 118 N: 309] (4066)
  • [2005-06-03 4:05]

Hi Carolyn,
I like this capture, a real daily life
You managed to bring us right in to the scene
But when I study the shot a bit longer I notice that there is a big guy with a big BIG camera in this shot and what ever you do you can’t miss him.
His in one third of the picture ,his camera is under the bouquet of flower it feels like HE is the center of the attention
But I like the catch and find that you should continue with the series this way

Ishai

This is great. The motion, the couple, the pro photographer with the smug smile on his face...all these elements seem to fall into place here. Excellent work.

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