Au centre de San Francisco. En attendant le gros TiP's.
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Pietrow (306) 2013-06-28 5:29
Interesujace ale ...... zrobilem WS do tego.
rigoletto (34279) 2013-06-28 6:08
i liked pietrow's WS but looking at the original version i think i like your version better. a face with a strong character, you could also make a portrait of his face.
chanteuse (210) 2013-06-28 7:26
This is wonderful, Elisabeth. I like your version best too. Seeing some of the context makes it more powerful and you've composed this beautifully - especially the angles of foot and fountain (?) and microphone.
emka (99901) 2013-06-29 14:13
Witaj, Zainteresowałam sie tym Workshopem, ale zdecydowanie wole Twoją wersję. Po co ucinać facetowi i kolano, i stope, i nawet kapelusz? Potrzeby wiekszego kontrastu tez nie widzę. Ewentualnie bym przycięła lekko lewą strone, nie wiadomo co tam jest. I wole bez ramki. Ciekawy facet z warkoczykami i mikrofonem. Ale obawiam sie, ze na te wieksze napiwki to sie nie doczekal..
kato (11630) 2013-06-30 18:57
You're capturing well this portrait by a good angle and excellent B/W tone/clarity, so it's interesting and impressive to see the old man who has made his living by the street musician minutely. He seems to be tired, this may be a low income group's reality which a newspaper never write.
avigur_11 (22099) 2013-10-05 0:47
This is a wnderful shot, elisbeth, and I am really happy that you have chosed b/w for this pictures. I guess the the hugh tip box is a wishfull thinking..