Canyonlands and the Colorado River Photo

Photographer’s Note

I decided to re-include the rocks in the foreground to help with the depth. I also cropped from the foreground and the sky. Hope you like the changes!

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ppetretta (153) 2004-12-31 13:31

I like this version a lot. The rocks do help, and they don't clutter the view up too much. But the cropping job is great, in fact it's just as I would have done it!

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cessy (13647) 2004-12-31 19:06

yes, the composition is excellent, I like the use of the rock in the foreground. and the view looks wider.

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waterboy (20) 2005-02-08 19:58

nice depth and colors

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Kenny10pin (19301) 2005-06-12 8:58

great shot, very straight forward and simple, I think it is a little too red though, but nice work

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plimrn (19558) 2006-03-11 0:33

I had to go way back to find a photo that didn't have a gazillion points. I'm not sure a critique for a photo posted this long ago has any validity for you. I'm sure you've moved WAY beyond this, but I really like this photo and I learned a lot from the difference between the originalk version and this one. This one is MILES better and I probably would have cropped the rocks out too, but this one DOES have so much more depth. thanks for the insight. :) Pat