Photographer’s Note
Pink flamingos mulling about the pond. I found their colors vibrant.
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joseelias
(367) 2004-11-04 9:06
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Really vibrant colors! And good sharpness too. About the composition I'm missing an element that grab our attention right from the start and then let us explore the rest of the image. For example a very close flamingo in the foreground or any other interesting subject like that.
To compensate that you may crop the photo a little to place the flamigos in a more important area of the image like the lower third (as they form almost a line). So I would crop the bottom almost until their feet and eventually the right part eliminating the half hidden first flamingo.
Some increase of the brightness in a graphical program could bring more joy to the composition also.
Just an advice about TE. Don’t be afraid to critique other photos. People appreciate constructive critiques with improvement ideas, and it will call attention on your work.
Photo Information
- Copyright: Hung Tran (royce10) (27)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2004-04-10
- Categories: Nature
- Camera: Kodak Easyshare CX6330
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2004-11-03 3:31








