Plate Lunch

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• robiuk (9977)
• [2004-06-06 8:37]
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Loveli daily-life photo. Well captured eating time. The boys look natural and very happy. The light is superb!
Pity that the food comes from McDonalds, though...!

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• pamastro (7209)
• [2004-06-07 1:54]

Very crisp and great lighting. You really captured looks of complete enjoyment as they eat the food. The one in the middle seems totally satisfied and the one on the right putting the food in his mouth seems to be savoring every bite. I like the background of the sea, too. I would think maybe crop it at the horizon to get rid of the sky. Very nicely done.

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• dopiro (824)
• [2004-06-11 10:16]

Nice crisp shot.
I may have cropped the bit of sky and the soda-pop on the right.
Excellent slice of daily life.

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• orme (6609)
• [2004-07-11 22:26]

The clarity of the shot is excellent, Robin. I like the way you captured the boy on the right. The sun has enriched the colours. Well done.

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• joso (1782)
• [2004-10-07 10:43]

Excellent colours, light, a very well captured moment. It must be very tasty...
A pitty about the wood behind them

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• philip_coggan (9)
• [2004-10-08 10:17]

I like your composition and I wouldn't change it - it's a very informal capture of children enjoying their food as only children can. Well done.