Sloans Lake Sunset

Critiques [Translate]

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• dumbo (1567)
• [2008-04-11 23:24]

Hi Paul,
Really beautiful colors and great composition.
I like the dramatic sky and those black shapes of birds.
Well done!

Best regards,
Eino

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• Longroute (2051)
• [2008-04-12 6:57]

Paul,
I generally don't even open sunset photographs, but this one is really beautiful. The clouds above, the frozen lake below, the range of mountains and the sky form a series of horizontal lines that give a geometricity to the whole image. Even the geese form a horizontal line!
Perhaps the person on the right is a bit disturbing, if -like myself - you love nature scenes unspoilt.
Greetings,
Donato

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• linask (2213)
• [2008-04-12 10:57]

All these horizontal lines look very good.
I agree with other critique - the person on the right looks a bit out of place. Maybe worth cropping out ?

Linas

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• jafadabret (26960)
• [2008-04-15 1:14]

Hi Paul,
J'aime les couleurs du ciel et de son reflet. Les oiseaux semblent suivre l'ombre qui part sur la droite.
Jacques

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• Beppo (497)
• [2008-04-17 10:39]

Hola Paul,

Nice composition and colours, well done

Josep,

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• jramos (417)
• [2008-08-20 20:06]

you've done a great job capturing such an intense sunset. I don't think the photo seeds the person in silhouette, but other than that it looks amazing.