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KevRyan
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(22352) 2009-10-23 10:58
There is something about the busy feel of this image that I like but overall for me it lacks a geometry that I can make visual sense of.....ntil after much eye movement I came to rest on the inverted triangle of the three primary subjects - it has more of an integrity to my eye now but I can imagine that the quick eye of a pasing through visitor might not pick up on this - it still strikes me as a little too busy in some ways and maybe I would have looked to a closer crop but I have enjoyed spending time with and exploring this image.
best wishes Kev
Photo Information
- Copyright: Don Michael Brown (dmbrowndp) (52)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Black & White
- Date Taken: 2008-10-00
- Categories: Decisive Moment
- Camera: Leica M2-Lever Rewind, (1962), Leica M Summilux 35mm/1:1.4 ASPH, Ilford Delta 400, Leitz/Leica UV(0)
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2009-10-23 10:27
Viewed: 248
Points: 1
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