Photographer’s Note
This is the final photo from the San Anselmo Community Parade and Fair that I've shared this week. The event really is for the children of this small community and they were out in abundance. With this photo and two workshops I'll give you a sense of the event for these children.
I noticed a crowd gathering at the small park in front of City Hall. The dozens of children perched atop their parent's shoulders told me something worth watching was happening in the midst of the crowd. I slipped around to the side to discover a young woman with a collection of birds, parrots, cockatoos performing as she shared her humorous banter. The audience, especially the children were mesmerized by these well trained birds. I found myself much more interested in the faces of the children such as this trio. If you ever have a doubt about believing in magic, you owe it to yourself to spend some time with children. It is remarkable to remember that every one of us at one time had our eyes wide open to the splendor of this world, the sights, sounds and smells. Just look at the expression on these children and perhaps you'll recall your own excitement at meeting each day. That is magic, for certain!
Enjoy!
The first workshop shows another boy atop his father's shoulder eating cotton candy, a confection without nutritional value but much loved for the high sugar content and sticky fingers it is bound to produce.
The second workshop shows the small train that traveled from one end of the Fair to the other, always loaded with parents and children. The girl at the back noticed me holding my camera and was intent on giving me this lovely smile.
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SophieL
(6030) 2005-10-07 8:05
Well, I rather enjoyed the whole series you presented about this event, but this one, to my eyes, does not meet the same achievement. I really can see what drawn you to the children's face, the intensity in their eyes, the concentration. Unfortunately, this doesn't stand out enough because there is a lot of distracting things on the picture, mostly all the bottom (and particularly this dark patch on the lower right, and also the giraffe's head (even though this head brings a humourous and sweet note). I tried cropping the picture just under the left boy's elbow, for a panoramic format. I like it a little better, but there is then an empty spot in the middle.
I like your WS much better, the first one is interesting because not only the boy is eating with delight his cotton candy, but it looks like the father is enjoying the view of the feminine silhouette in the shop window. It is simply composed and the tilt (much talked about on TE this day) fits nicely here. The second WS is also interesting for the composition, the back of the train leaving and the girl smiling, simple pleasure of a child.
I hope you don't mind this not-too-enthusiastic comment, it's the first image from you that I have difficulties to relate to.
erdna
(5360) 2005-10-07 14:52
Yes, a lot of people do. Look at those anxious and attentive faces! That is what made this picture interesting and good.
Andre'
Photo Information
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Copyright: Curtis Grindahl (cgrindahl)
(6109) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2005-10-02
- Categories: Daily Life, Festivals
- Camera: Canon EOS 20D, Tamron 28-75 f/2.8 DI, Digital RAW, B+W 67mm UV-Haze MRC
- Exposure: f/3.2, 1/1000 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2005-10-07 2:34
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