Photographer’s Note
This is the final posting I have for my travelogue. It’s one of the few pics I took on my last day in USA as we made our way across the Mojave Desert from Barstow, where we’d stayed the previous night, to Los Angeles for my flight home that afternoon. To the casual observer, it’s just an open piece of desert with no distinguishing features but, in a way, it’s kind of symbolic to me. It was also the last of the wide open spaces I saw on the trip. The initially apparent emptiness summed up the way I was feeling at the time, knowing that it was going to be a long time before I saw scenery such as this again and also because I knew I was going to miss the company of a very good friend. However, looking at the scene in more detail reveals so much abundance, even in this relatively inhospitable place, which parallels the overwhelmingly enlightening and fulfilling experience that this entire trip was for me. One day I will return to bask in this land’s beauty and to share the experience with another friend who has come to mean a lot to me.
The original photo wasn’t that good. It lacked definition, clarity and the lightness, which looked to be the same as on a cloudy day even though there wasn’t a cloud in the sky, and contrast hadn’t come out right either. Although much of it is attributable to my lack of ability with the camera at the time, I’m also aware that some of the initial image processing and printing wasn’t of a very high standard.
Alterations to the pic include the following: -
-Cropping to remove the road from the foreground and a large portion of the sky.
-Increasing both light and contrast, treating different parts of the image with varying amounts of adjustment.
-Blurring the sky to mask some very visible image noise before reapplying it with the gradient tool (at 50% opacity) using lightened versions of the original colours.
-Selectively sharpening parts of the image while leaving others alone.
I’ve done the best I can however my knowledge of Photoshop still has plenty of room for improvement. I hope the finished image looks satisfactory to you.
Thanks to all those who have followed this travelogue. I know the image quality hasn’t always been the greatest but I was (and still am) on a learning curve when it comes to correcting problems with images and preparing them for posting on this excellent website.
It was an experience that changed my perspective on life and I publicly acknowledge that I owe a huge debt of gratitude to my good friend and travelling companion, Mr Van Milton. If it wasn’t for him, this entire trip would never have happened. His local knowledge, patience, kindness, and understanding helped make the journey that much more special and his love and care for the environment influenced me to the core of my being forever.
Kind regards,
Tony
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AandK
(1795) 2007-02-12 17:55
Hey Mr. T to the ony,
I have to admit that I didn't read any of the facts concerning the image but the first and the last paragraph twice! I was really impressed by your words on travelling and relations during being far away from home and certain feelings. At first there was the feeling of not seeing comparable things for a long time at the end of a trip. You definetely described this to the point. While you are travelling it feels like you are in the middle of a different live. You start to enjoy things in a different way! At the end of the trip you are called back to daily life pretty harsh including the feeling of not wanting to leave the seen landscapes and met people. I felt that way after leaving from Ecuador since I met a lot of very nice people there. What you forget is that there are always several reasons to look forward to coming home, aren't there?
You really chose some nice words and I almost added this shot to my favorites due to the note;)
Ttyl,
your friend Andreas!
btw: awesome shot!
Janice
(4386) 2007-02-13 14:11
Ah Tony, all good holidays have to come to an end. Looks like this one was a life changing experience for you.
Your pic does look good - well composed, and colours as I would expect of the desert.
And it sounds like you know your way around PS quite well. (I know who to ask for help now - thank you )
Thank you for showing us of your traveloque of your time in USA.
Janice
bracasha75
(22031) 2007-02-14 7:55
Helo Tony
Exellent view on this desert greath shot.
Just a master work
Cheers my freind,Braca
kittyhawk
(1687) 2007-02-14 13:09
Hello Tony,
Nice photo of the Mojave. I like the feeling of vast open space, and the contrast between the blue sky and the grayish color of the dessert floor. TFS.
- Halgeir
vagabondtravels
(6103) 2007-02-15 2:38
Hi Tony
Nice image from the desert. You must have had a great trip and you visited some spectacular places. Good work.
Ben
Photo Information
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Copyright: Tony King (tonyking)
(1599) - Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2002-07-03
- Categories: Nature
- Camera: Minolta dynax 5, 28-80mm/3.5-5.6, 55mm UV filter
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Travelogue: Road Trip 2002 - USA
- Date Submitted: 2007-02-12 17:15








