Photographer’s Note
This is an homage to Torben and his gritty urban scenes often displayed with exaggerated contrast. I took the photo with my camera cradled in my arms without looking in the view finder. I pressed the shutter button down half way to focus, though I'm never certain what it is the camera will focus upon.
This young woman, likely a teenager returning home after school, was intensely engaged in a conversation on her rhinestone studded cell phone. The image was compromised by the great contrast between her face in shadow and the glaring white stucco of the building in the background. When it proved impossible to reclaim a color image I converted to black and white. It was then I recalled a recent photo by Torben entitled Speaking and decided to experiment with a harsher application of contrast. This is the result. Without the intensity in the girl's face it might be too much, but at least to my eye it works. Above the girl's head you see a small sign that says "Town of Fairfax."
It happens that yesterday I had lunch with the father of a teen about the same age as this young woman and our conversation touched on the challenges of rearing teens in this age of computers, the internet and cell phones. As he observed, kids have so much freedom to get into trouble. Since kids will be kids, they almost certainly will do so. We laughed about the trouble we got into when we were teens, but somehow those seemed much more innocent times. No more.
I've no idea what this young woman is talking about and certainly have no sense that she is a troubled person. I use this scene to tell my story, no more nor less. Perhaps you know someone just like her... ;-)
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Furachan
(0) 2005-11-10 3:53
Nice capture Curtis - it does indeed have a gritty feel to it, I might have liked to see a color version...
By the way I'm all swimming in 85mm bokeh today too if you care to take a look - but no grain and very colorful!
I like the tilt too, well observed.
Cheers,
Francis
torben
(3084) 2005-11-16 14:40
Oh boy, a homage, I'm flattered (seriously, I am),
So maybe my appraisal of this shot sounds a bit hollow, return of favours and all that, but I hope that I still can critique to my usual standards and I like this shot very much.
You caught that girl in a moment filled with presence and action, something very everyday, in my opinion this is learning about the world through photography although not in the tourist view category, more in the human interest category. And it certainly reminds me of someone I once knew.
The use of hard contrast is a good choice here with all of the tilt and action happening in the frame. But while the main subject and the overall image gained from the hard contrast, the background suffered. The soft out-of-focus areas now looks like quite coarse and abstract shapes. Maybe you could have used a mask on a Brightness/Contrast adjustment layer to reduce the effect on the background. Very blurred backgrounds need to be soft.
I notice that you only received one critique so far, I think this photo deserves more, but at the same time this kind of style clearly isn't the most popular on TE.
I like it though.
Photo Information
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Copyright: Curtis Grindahl (cgrindahl)
(6109) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2005-11-09
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Canon EOS 20D, Canon 85 f/1.8, Digital RAW, B+W 58mm UV-Haze MRC
- Exposure: f/3.2, 1/4000 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2005-11-10 2:26








