L.E.A.V.I.N.G Photo

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Another photo from my school.

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sanalytis (1634) 2007-02-07 23:04

Hi Sothy,

Your getting very creative. I like your diagonal composition very much. B&W works very nicely, especially with the white curved staircase. Placement of the leaving student and blurring effect also enhances the photo.
Very well done.

Spiros

zips (1941) 2007-02-07 23:22

Very nice capture which shows you are looking through your camera lens without fear and convention.

Perhaps a slightly lower POV and a bit less tilt would make the arch shape of the composition a bit more outstanding....I don't know.

The timing is good with the blur of the woman exiting.

Great job.
Aloha, JB

devimeuxbe (56300) 2007-02-07 23:39

Hi Sothy
This one is very nice. The curve on the floor and the shade throught the door. It is really excellent. You also get a nice POV.
Well done
Bertrand

Miks (1707) 2007-02-07 23:52

Wild composition. Buit it works. The tilted angle does not only make the image extremely dynamic, it also contributes to making the curved lines 'being' in the corner and lead out the door with the departing subject. Great, creative idea and very well executed.

Best,
Mikkel

wolf38 (13069) 2007-02-08 8:00

Hello Sothy. a beautiful experiment in B&W with lines and structures. The impression is strengthened still by the inclined level. Very beautifully and worth seeing. Best regards, Wolfgang.

bostankorkulugu (33962) 2007-02-08 11:31

that curve is so cool sothy... i like the tilted composition and the girl leaving the shot adds a lot...

cheers

korkut:)

stego (22448) 2007-02-08 11:38

Hi Sothy,
What a compo! Much imaginative and well done! It's rare that such inclined pov's result so well. I like both the graphical arrangement and the dynamism.
That school really inspires you and you are becoming a B&W master.
Regards, José.

michiels (4170) 2007-02-08 12:22

hello Sothy,

THis is one of your best shots of school. The design on the floor is like a escalator where the woman is walking. Great tilt and nice in b&w !
greetings, inn

SamB (1948) 2007-02-08 16:59

Hello, Sothy--
Hmm... i think that this is my favorite so far from your school. The tilt works because the strong horizontal curves of the foreground provide a kind of visual sea level, and those hard leading lines that end at the motion blurred figure leaving behind the sea of empty chairs... i like it a lot.
Thanks!
sam

cunejo200 (7237) 2007-02-10 13:04

Hi Sothy, This is very artistic framing. I like the motion of the girl, and of course the sharpness and contrast in the room. Excellent work. Greetings! Danilo

rigoletto (26762) 2007-02-10 15:38

Hello Sothy,
We are already a part of your school, peeping every corner of it, thanks to your camera. It is interesting how you captured this nice curvature, a daily life detail most probably ignored by lots of the inhabitants of this place. It became further catchy with the angle of your POV. Good capture.
Congrats,
Deniz

siolaw (25830) 2007-02-11 14:05

Hi Sothy,
An original compo, very graphical with tilt increasing the strange atmosphere... i like the lines in FG, and the person on her way out is well placed..
TFS
Laurent

sabyasachi1212 (19546) 2007-02-12 11:13

Hi Sothy,
Excellent compositiom my friend. Graphical impact with those lines and the tilt working effectively.
With Greetings from India
Sabyasachi

adores (15741) 2007-02-12 15:11

Hi Sothy!
These are the same sofas, I suppose. Great graphical photo. I like your POV, the sense of movement here and the B&W was a really good option.
Regards, Anabela

t0mmm1 (5434) 2007-02-15 16:03

Hi Sothy,
this is really wonderful. The way you have composed the curve into the frame gives wonderful dynamism... the best part is that following those curvy lines I meet the person that's just leaving through the brightest part of the picture. I like it very much.
Have a nice day,
Tomi

robiuk (10763) 2007-02-16 18:03

Hi Sothy,
Haven't seen all of your photos - went quickly through about 30, but quickly.
This seems to stand out as because it appears to be showing two different worlds: one being the interior of your school and the other being a racing track. And indeed, studying does sometimes feel like a rat race of a grown-up, after you've finished with your education.
Very interesting and successful shot!
Congratulations!
Robi

Cricri (43706) 2007-02-17 5:20

Bonjour Sothy,
Joli la prise de vue, effet original parfait, avec un bon choix N/B, excellent
bonne journée
amitié
cricri