Photographer’s Note
This is a side st off Cranston st, on the city's West End. The yellow castle is the Armory which is kept in an almost abandoned condition. This is one of the city's poorest neighborhoods.
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Greg1949
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(8507) 2008-10-31 4:22
Juan, I see that you have just started critiquing the shots of others so while you are not new to TE I welcome you to the commenting side. This shot has some merit, I think the angle of the road crossing the frame is good but that the shot appears tilted because of the way the tower on the armory leans to the right. There seems to be no real subject other than the street in general I think that the open space at the end of the road takes up too much of the frame. I think the shot would be better if you got closer to the buildings on the left, this would change the angle down the street and close up that hole. It would also put more of the lit side of the street in the frame. Keep trying, this is all worth the effort.
Greg
Photo Information
- Copyright: juan ortiz (providence) (8)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-03-24
- Categories: Daily Life
- Exposure: f/4.6, 1/350 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2007-03-27 19:01
