Photographer’s Note
Highland Park in Rochester is a great park. It has the lilacs for which it is most famous, but there also ponds, and hills and paths. This photo was taken in early evening with low light. I've cropped it down to just focus on the girl and the path that she followed to the pond.
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erdna
(5348) 2008-12-16 16:55
A very nice composition and good exposure too, but it does not look very well focused or could this could be solved by tweaking the contrast through post processing to improve it?
Andre'
Nelu_Goia
(2724) 2008-12-16 19:34
Hi Pamela,
Superb composition but technically not quite so.
It is very soft and the file size is too small (51KB).
You should go back and shoot it again with a tele lens:)
Thanks,
Nelu
saxo042
(15586) 2008-12-16 22:38
Hi Pamela,
I really like this idea and the way you have composed this very fine picture. But it isn´t very sharp and you should use the full size allowed by TE, max. 800 pixels. This is only 640 pixels and only 50kB, you you use up to 300 kB. That way you could have improved an already fine picture.
Regards
Gunnar
Photo Information
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Copyright: Pamela Cooper (pamsutherland)
(42) - Genre: People
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2008-05-26
- Categories: Daily Life
- Camera: Canon Rebel XTi
- Exposure: f/5.6, 1/13 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2008-12-16 16:33
Discussions
- To Nelu_Goia: Lens (1)
by pamsutherland, last updated 12-17 20:19 - To saxo042: sizing (1)
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