Photographer’s Note
I added a little grain to make the water seem more surreal and give an overall saddened effect, in order to contrast the mood of the running girls within the picture.
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thebecky
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(686) 2004-12-09 22:23
I think the grainy idea was good but the dark part in the left corner of the image bothers me a bit. I might be tempted to try a slightly different crop. The mood is nice though and the reflections of the girls in the sand.
vapours
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(7913) 2004-12-09 23:09
You have done well with this image, I like the mood you have created. Personally I think the cropping is fine!
amrinolastname
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(220) 2004-12-09 23:57
well done ! nice toning and framing. I like the reflection very well.
Karthik
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(306) 2004-12-10 4:39
good moment captured well! I like the grains and the tone you have created.
Photo Information
- Copyright: Sandy Zhao (sandyshots) (24)
- Genre: People
- Medium: Black & White
- Date Taken: 2004-08-27
- Categories: Daily Life
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2004-12-09 21:30
