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Copyright: Kristaps KL (zmey) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1376 W: 102 N: 1430] (5540)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-11-25
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Nikon D80, 18-200 f/3.5-5.6G IF-ED AF-S DX VR Zoom
Exposure: f/8, 1/160 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-11-24 21:40
Viewed: 649
Points: 38
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Shelburne Falls - a village located in the towns of Shelurne and Buckland in Franklin County, Massachusetts, United States. Notable features include the Bridge of Flower, a former trolley bridge over the Deerfield River, and the glaciel potholes of the Deerfield River. The downtown is lively and filled with cozy wood-construction homes. Here is a fragment of one of them.

but the main reason, i posted this is that, according to terry pratchet, trolls way of counting goes as "one, two (as seen here), three, many, many-one, many-two...". well, here's two. i hope to post a link to "many" soon.

argh... ;)

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Hello Kristaps
good OBSERVATION and good idea
i like the rhythm
TFS
best regareds
Ozhan

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  • KLB Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 750 W: 340 N: 2031] (9399)
  • [2007-11-24 23:18]
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Hello Kristaps

Great graphism ! The tilt works well and makes an original composition. Perhaps you could have added a little more contrast to emphasize the blue and yellow, but that's all.

Regards,
Karine

Hi Kristaps
Very nice idea.....
Good work
Cheers,Braca

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  • MarcT Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2049 W: 517 N: 4092] (16390)
  • [2007-11-24 23:38]

Hi Kristaps,
Original framing, excellent colors, interesting tilt on you picture. Good graphical result.
Well done
Marc

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  • konok Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 226 W: 0 N: 119] (1981)
  • [2007-11-25 8:07]

Minimalist, graphic, impressive!
TFS
Janos

Hi Kristaps,

simple but effective, nice idea to tilt the view, good geometrical elements

Well done!

Gio

Hello Kristaps,
I like this graphical effect, good framing of the two windows, well seen and done.
Regards

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  • ifanik Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1643 W: 52 N: 3036] (16900)
  • [2007-11-25 19:35]

Hi kristaps
Beautiful minimal picture that shows photographic glance with splendid colours
Very well done
Nick

K: being on the road (Rajasthan) gives me very little time or incentive to critque or reciprocate with critiques on TE. Nice geometric eye here though. Fine architectural study. regards, c

Hi, Kristaps.
Ehm... you have my same skill: "Arranging simple things into exciting photographs". This is a fantastic example!
Best regards
Renzo

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  • delic Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1368 W: 64 N: 1844] (6574)
  • [2007-11-26 15:02]

Nice graphism with the crossing diagonals, Kristaps. Well seen and composed. Regards,
Hakan

I really like this simple shot of these windows. The fact that the lines are tilted, and the windows diagonal makes for a much more interesting shot.

Very original!

Simple but charming, Kristaps, I like that the lines here go diagonally and of course the colours work well together, as the blue breaks the yellow... also the fact that one of the windows is completely black while the other isn't adds interest.

Cheers
Alexander

Hi Kristaps,
Interesting graphism you make here. I appreciated the diagonal of the POV. Nice colors and contrasts. Well done, regards, Consuelo

Hi Kristaps,
İt's an original work indeed, I liked your POV very much, cheers..
Selnur

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  • danyy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 7613 W: 448 N: 10779] (54821)
  • [2007-11-28 15:00]

Bonjour Kristaps,
c'est très graphique et aussi bien exposé et net ce qui donnr un vrai gâteau à dévorer des yeux.
Magnifiques contrastes des teintes.
Bestregards.
Daniel.

Hi Kristaps,

Originale et décalée, ta photo.
Ce jeu de diagonales est très bien vu.
Marie

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  • belido Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3343 W: 111 N: 2909] (10339)
  • [2008-03-31 16:15]

Hi Kristaps,

long time I don't see compos like that in here. Simple and effective play with lines and shapes and great use of the color contrast between the windows and the wall. The tilt was a clever idea. Dynamic, very good work!
Regards,
Carlos

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  • gunbud Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 4607 W: 4 N: 4484] (20064)
  • [2008-07-24 20:11]

Hi Kristaps,
No two colors look better in combonation than yellow and blue and the black goes well with this combo.
Excellent details to this house near the VFW just across the Bridge of Flowers.

Regards, Tom

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