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Portland Maine - Lighthouse


Portland Maine - Lighthouse
Photo Information
Copyright: Mark Snodgrass (sndgrss) (23)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-04-09
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/9.8, 1/181 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-12-28 17:20
Viewed: 966
Points: 11
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To trinko: Too Dark?sndgrss 2 01-06 11:59
To borka: Thanks - good editssndgrss 1 01-06 10:29
To borka: good workshop Boriscobbydale 1 12-28 18:27
To trinko: sorry but I can't agreecobbydale 1 12-28 18:24
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nice composition but too dark. take a look at my workshop for an alternative view of this photo.

Hi Mark, I also like your composition a lot, and I also made a workshop -
I would disagree with Tom that it is too dark, in my opinion it is mostly the contrast/saturation/noise issue. I also made a workshop, hopefully you like my version as well.
Regards,

Boris

This is a pretty good shot Mark, nice composition. It just needed the contrast and levels adjusting a bit as per Boris's excellent workshop.

Some notes would help though.
TFS. Leon.

Mark,
I like your composition here very much. Without the adjustments the photo has a very different mood than after it has been altered. I really like the original version and Boris' version, both have their merits.
Thanks for a great photo of the wonderful lighthouse.
Asa

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  • Didi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6591 W: 3465 N: 8269] (30442)
  • [2007-01-06 12:10]

Hello Mark
No your composition is not so dark.
It's ok with my flat screen, but it's not sufficient sharp.
The best WS is Boris one.
Cheers.

I am inclined to agree with DIDI. I don't think it's too dark for the place and the mood, but some sharpening would make it much better. The composition is excellnt.

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