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At Our Disposal


At Our Disposal
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Copyright: Jason Polaski (jaypolaski) (18)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-09
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Kiev 4A, Jupiter 8M 5cm f/2, Ilford HP5+ 400
Exposure: f/16, 1/1000 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2005-09-16 17:36
Viewed: 959
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Part of an essay I'm putting together following the "freaks" of society. I'm trying to show the world that they are in fact human first. This piece was to broaden the horizons, and include members of the urban lifestlye...the "gangsters" if you will.

Enjoy!

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Hi Jason, welcome to TE.
Good image and looking forward to seeing the project. As for this image, I wish his feet were not cut off, and the background on the left was different than the parked car, perhaps something that would be more in sink with the motto of the project (cars often aren't overly interesting).
Consider posting your next images a bit bigger, difficult to appreciate the beauty when they are this small.
Peter

Jason,

Welcome to TE. This photo is a good start. I see Peter's already given you some good advice, especially about photo size.

I like the 'tude of the guy on the right, and the fact that his friend is obviously enjoying it as well.

I wish you the best with your project and look forward to seeing more results.

Lee

P.S. A well-chosen title. A lot of people don't put much thought into them, or make them too cutesy. This one's cool.

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