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Broadview
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| Photo Information |
| Copyright: Valerie Smith (vsmith) (2) |
| Genre: Places |
| Medium: Color |
| Date Taken: 2005-10 |
| Categories: Ruins |
| Exposure: f/4.3, 1/250 seconds |
| More Photo Info: [view] |
| Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop |
| Date Submitted: 2008-05-30 20:09 |
| Viewed: 401 |
| Points: 0 |
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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
This picture was taken of Broadview Developmental Center while it was being demolished. It's disgusting how a building with such incredible architecture/history could be torn down so carelessly.
More to come. :) |
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Good evening Valerie and welcome on Treakearth.
Your photo is very interesting for what it has to tell, but the shooting did not reflect your speech.
Before talking about your photo, I would like to clarify that I am a amateur, all I'll tell you is only my opinion.
The composition:
You explain in your note that this building will be destroyed, but the distance that you take does not value the grabats in the bottom of the image. The bus, van and tree cut on the right striker reading of the image. The use of the fence is, however, a great idea because gives meaning to the image (this is the work of destruction) and provide an extra dimension to the image. The part of the photo on the sky seems too great.
The technique:
The building is too dark (under-statement) and reviewed.
Changes made in workshop:
-- Reorganization of the building.
-- Crop
-- Adjusting level (dark shades lit).
Eric
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